Reviews for A Black Flag
| Brooklynhills97 | 2018.01.07 - 11:42PM | 1: A Disappearance | Signed |
| First chapter and I’m hooked :) |
| severus49 | 2010.01.19 - 08:35PM | 9: A Relocation | Signed |
| A little constructive critism from one FF writer to another: It's basically a very good story, but there's a ton of background missing. Why is she working with Snape? Why did he pick her? Why are they working on that potion? Why take it to Pilar? How did Pilar capture her? So much missing. Plus an older man just wouldn't fall in love with a student (Btw I'm 41 and I teach!) There's got to be more to it than just 'he loves her for her mind'. Please take time to fill the story out more! |
| airi | 2008.03.25 - 07:19PM | 9: A Relocation | Signed |
| Ack! ?T?his story is so good, please tell me you plan to update soon? |
| Katsrule | 2006.09.19 - 10:02PM | 1: A Disappearance | Signed |
| Hello,
I have noticed it has been quite a while since this story has been updated...are you going to finish it? I only read stories that are completed because I find myself becoming so frustrated when they are just left. I would REALLY love to read your story...PLEASE finish it when you can. Thanks |
| kamelia | 2006.06.30 - 03:44PM | 9: A Relocation | Signed |
| have you given up on this story elusterman? It has been a very good read so far, please update.
~kamelia~ |
| kamelia | 2006.06.30 - 03:15PM | 7: An Explanation | Signed |
| ooohhhh, lovely =)
~kamelia~ |
| kamelia | 2006.06.30 - 02:57PM | 6: A Success | Signed |
| Very cool potion! Don't be too hard on yourself, you have done a great job with this story so far. I am envious of those who have the talent to write good fan fic.
~kamelia~ |
| kamelia | 2006.06.30 - 02:50PM | 5: A Discovery | Signed |
| hmmm, looks like Snape is going to be the one who needs to be rescued now. Very good story so fa.!
~kamelia~ |
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