Reviews for A Choice of Roads
| Sniv | 2005.02.05 - 10:58AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Hope to see an update soon :-) |
| That Sad Song | 2005.02.04 - 05:52AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Oh, I do love this story so much! This was a very evil cliffhanger, indeed. I'm tired of Harry thinking it's all about him, and I do hope that Hermione gives him a piece of her mind!
On a merely techincal point, you seem to like using parentheses to mark sidenotes. I totally relate, as I also really like using parentheses to make off the cuff remarks. However, since you do use them quite frequently, you may want to switch things up a bit. Sometimes what you put in the parentheses can be marked off with commas, or you can use a sejura or m-dash (--) to denote these sidenotes. Or, you can just ignore what I'm saying and keep writing the lovely stuff you're writing! Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| larana | 2005.01.28 - 10:19PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| I love the character progression in the relationship. It is more realistic than most. Please post again soon :) |
| Lady Lynx | 2005.01.28 - 04:33AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| *mutter mutter* kill you for the Cliffy... *mutter mutter* have your head.. Keep writing, please! I particularly like how you describe Severus's need. I've always imagined him craving, needing, hungering for her, and opposed to being completely in control. It very good, update soon! |
| ljasell | 2005.01.27 - 09:50AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| This is such a romantic, realistic story, considering the characters.
The relationship pace you've taken with the characters seems realistic as well. I've followed your story for a long time...please post the next chapter soon. I like the way you describe your settings. : ) |
| Laughing Cat | 2005.01.22 - 05:29PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Oooo, what a perfect cliffhanger! ^^ I can just imagine the next chapter: "Why, yes, of course there was a perfectly logical reason that Remus saw me eating dinner with Severus over the weekend. Severus asked me out to eat. Are there any more questions, or was that the entire reason that I was invited over for the evening?"
*laughs* I /adored/ this chapter! 14 pages of goodness, filled with plenty of Severus/Hermione fluff. ^^ I keep expecting Hermione to get caught by the management and thrown out without so much as a recommendation... *winces* Poor girl. What /can/ she do with her significant other rooming at the place where she works? |
| Magdelena | 2005.01.18 - 01:53PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| That was an absolutely wonderful update!!! Can't wait for more!!! |
| corky42 | 2005.01.09 - 12:47PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| I like the gentleness of this story; very soothing to read. Please don't make it too lemony at the end as it would rather break the mood the rest of the story has set. I love lemons but sometimes implied is better than explicit! Love Severus-Crow! |
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