Reviews for A Choice of Roads
| southern_witch_69 | 2004.12.14 - 01:09PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| woohooo...loving this story! Just found it today thanks to the email! Now, i'm patiently waiting for the next chap! Darn Harry, by the way! |
| Bambu | 2004.12.14 - 01:04PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| What a lovely way to start the day... fruit and flowers. The gentle, careful blossoming of the relationship between Severus and Hermione is nicely juxtaposed with the coercive imperiousness of Harry's demand that she come see him to account for her behavior. Next month? So long a wait... sigh, but good things come to those who wait, and I'm learning patience. |
| klo | 2004.12.14 - 12:48PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Oh, what a tease! I had been wondering if there would be an update to this story and ow to leave it hanging like that.... Hmph.
Honestly, I am enjoying the very slow and very tentative courtship dance between Severus and Hermione. I can see him being oh-so-cautious and oh-so-suspicous of anything bordering on trust and it seems that Hermione is tuned into that as well. It's hard to believe that an 18 year old girl coud be so patient but then Hermione's always been mature for her age. The sharing of grapes was sweet, erotic and promising all at the same time and having Severus-Crow arrive with grapes was definitely the right touch.
This cliffhanger - with the imperious and annoying Harry - promises much in the future. I do hope that update come soon!
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| Armor | 2004.12.14 - 12:36PM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| I was so glad when i saw your story in the news :)
It was so sweet and lovely. And i loved very much you your Severus-crow behaviour in the garden. Well, i don't think it's really a cliffhanger because Hermione is a logical girl who knows very well her two best friends.
I'm glad to hear you can update next month.
And merry Christmas to you as well. |
| Fictionlover_32 | 2004.12.14 - 11:50AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Hey! It's Shin here. I'm so glad you've updated! I've noticed you didn't update on ff.net but it's okay. I also like the fact that your chapters are long. I truly love their stolen moments together! It seems like they're get musher every time they spend together. Not to mention they're so cute when they tease each other! Especially Snape! I never imagined him feeding Hermione grapes! That was totally un-Snape like! But it was so romantic at the same time! And So Harry wants explains, does he? I wondered when he was going to show. I hope doesn't meddle with Hermione and Snape because, frankly, it's none of his business who Hermione goes out with. As long as she's happy, he should be happy for her. I wonder what Hermione's reaction will be? I can't wait for the next installment! I guess I'll just have to wait very patiently! Update soon! Cheers! |
| Miri Tiazan | 2004.12.14 - 11:50AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Anonymous |
| Wow. Harry's a git. Smack smack smack. Who's he to dictate, huh? Nobody. Smack. Yes. Anyway. Update soon, please! |
| AngelQueen | 2004.12.14 - 11:07AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Wow... Imhilien, this is a really awesome story! I usually prefer to wait until stories are either finished or almost finished before I start reading them, but I'm really glad I made an exception for this story! The premise for the story is wonderfully unique, I think, and I have greatly enjoyed what you have finished so far. Let's hope Harry and Ron don't totally alienate Hermione in the next chapter. Wonderful job! I can't wait for more. And a very Merry Christmas to you as well! |
| LilytheSpitfire | 2004.12.14 - 10:53AM | 20: Of Fruit and Flowers | Signed |
| Imhilien...even though waiting a month for your updates is painful on the mind, its well worth it in terms of your writing quality and the length. I look forward to reading the next installment. |
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