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Reviews for Who Do You Want?

Lily Phoenix Prongs2005.09.12 - 11:25PM10: "Two Little Words"Signed
I can relate to you about the men and not having a bf till you're 21, i'm only 20 and i've never had one either and men under 24 don't know their way around a woman's body. LOL. Looking forward to the sequel.

Lily Phoenix Prongs2005.09.12 - 11:09PM7: "Today's Menu: Sex, Wine, and Fantasy #7"Signed
i agree, A dominatrixal Snape in leather would definitely turn me on.

ionika2005.09.06 - 11:20AM10: "Two Little Words"Signed
i really liked it.

Avari2005.09.05 - 04:33AM9: "No Fear of Flying"Signed
Well, as I happen to be French, I'd like to point out there are still a couple of mistakes. :) In polite French we never use the person's family name when talking to that person directly, unlike what you do in English. Also, "comment allons-nous ce soir?" is what a hospital nurse would say to a patient. It's not used in polite society, as it sounds either slightly demeaning, or a bit like you're in a village fair. So here's a slightly more natural (to my ear) version, as French doesn't translate well word to word from English: "Bonsoir Monsieur. Comment allez-vous? Je vois que Monsieur est accompagné. Très bien. La table habituelle?" "Bien sûr, Michel. Et nous prendrons une bouteille de Krug, s'il vous plaît."

KiraAriannya2005.09.05 - 01:22AM10: "Two Little Words"Signed
A great story

joannie2005.09.04 - 11:42AM10: "Two Little Words"Anonymous
Just found this story last night and finshed it this morning. I loved it! OOC for Snape? Maybe just a wee - but I've witnessed this type of change - so it is possible, maybe not in a week - but yes possible. Of the languages required for Potions - why Arabic and not Aramaic? Just a question. Looking forward to your sequel!

ilovelucy45672005.09.02 - 07:29PM10: "Two Little Words"Signed
Omg I loved the story, wished that you would have spanned it wider ( more than a week) but other than that I LOVED IT 1 of the best

Cherdy the Molologist2005.08.23 - 10:26PM10: "Two Little Words"Signed
Finished! I don't know why I didn't read it sooner! It was absolutely lovely. I love your Snape. None of that 'boys don't cry' nonsense. I did have this recommended to me numerous times, from several different people, and I can see why. I will most definitely be passing on the message. I hope to see a sequel soon, I can't get enough of your exquisite writing. I will be reading 'and they didn't live happily ever after' but I am waiting until it is completed. Thank you again for taking the time to write and share this wonderful fic.

Author's Response: So you read my gratuitously smutty fic at work? My, you are brave! It was my first HG/SS fic and I thought Severus should have a little bit more heart...many have noted how Severus is too soft in this fic and he is a bit soft for canon, but who doesn't swoon over a man who finally realizes it's okay to be in touch with one's emotions. I know - totally uncanon Snape, but it did make him quite shaggable. I'll be putting up an abbreviated sequel - not as long as originally intended, but it will still have some fun and smut. You're going to have to wait a while for ATDLHEA to be finished, but I *will* finish it. Thanks again for taking the time to read.

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