Reviews for Let Me Be Your Hero
| loreen77 | 2015.11.04 - 05:44PM | 1: | Signed |
| Wow, several previous reviewers were really harsh. They criticism was uncalled for. It was simply a fluff story. It was sweet and hopeful. Thank you for sharing your writing. |
| ChloeWeird | 2010.08.21 - 01:58PM | 1: | Signed |
| Didn't like this story at all for the following reasons:
1: This plotline is very overused, and you didn't add anything special to make it interesting.
2: The song doesn't really add anything, and it's a bit awkwardly placed. I say scrap it completely and change the title.
3: I don't understand this sentence...
"overly large breasts for the same reason."
How does hunching over for long periods of time make your breasts bigger at 23 years old? I think you have a misunderstanding of basic female anatomy.
4: Hermione is far too whiny and needy, and Severus is annoying and mean and not appealing at all! (This coming from a HUGE Snape fan.)
The concept might have been alright if you'd had any skill. Sorry if that's harsh, but that's what I think. |
| jasmineleigh | 2008.11.10 - 03:38PM | 1: | Signed |
| omfg i love it it made me cry :( |
| LilithTavari | 2008.10.28 - 12:10AM | 1: | Signed |
| Eh... Yeah, not good. Your writing seriously cries for polish and finesse. Punctuation is your friend. Also, your plot development = fail. |
| too chicken shit. | 2006.09.20 - 04:41PM | 1: | Anonymous |
| what's with the image of hermione you've presented in several of your fics? 23 and chubby hardly constitutes character development. and i'm rather surprised at the admins for letting you post this story under pwp...granted, it has no plot, but fluff would fit much better. |
| sss | 2006.08.09 - 10:24AM | 1: | Anonymous |
| They're called commas. Ever heard of 'em? |
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