Reviews for Ferveo Vestis!
Anon | 2004.11.30 - 09:00PM | 1: Ferveo Vestis! | Anonymous |
This is my favourite bit-
“The trembling girl sighed with her first womanly release of passion.”
“Severus! Oh, bloody fuck!” Hermione shrieked as she came. " Very, very good, thanks for a laugh.
Author's Response: *snicker* That's one of the bits that made me laugh when I wrote it. I'm so glad it made you laugh as well! :) |
Jade_Orchid | 2004.11.30 - 08:54PM | 1: Ferveo Vestis! | Signed |
Talk about being "overcome with feeling!" (snickers) Pooka, I told you earlier today how fabulous this is, but I'll say it again: it's fabulous! I was honored to beta this little jem of a tale. I do so like it when your mind wanders; though I'm glad it will wander back to OWF now. Bravo for this smut biscuit!
Author's Response: You are an angel and a vixen and I can't thank you enough for your kind help in making this smut biscuit fit for viewing! You rock, Jade! :) |
Kris | 2004.11.30 - 08:46PM | 1: Ferveo Vestis! | Anonymous |
haha itd be better if she just go and put the hex on harry and draco... haha
Author's Response: Lol! I actually had planned to have Severus do that very thing at the end, but I decided I liked where it ended as is. Perhaps that should be a sequel, but where would I post it! *giggle* :) |
anonymous | 2004.11.30 - 08:42PM | 1: Ferveo Vestis! | Anonymous |
Wonderful, funny, and pitch-perfect for the narrator. Thanks for brightening up the evening.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :) |
ancientgirl | 2004.11.30 - 08:37PM | 1: Ferveo Vestis! | Anonymous |
LOL, the grace of a five dollar prostitute? Great story! I was laughing my ass off!
Author's Response: Thank you Sweet-girl! I'm so glad it made you laugh! :) |
Judy K. | 2004.11.30 - 08:33PM | 1: Ferveo Vestis! | Anonymous |
Oh so hot!! What a wickedly cool story. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! :) |
Shteffi | 2004.11.30 - 08:33PM | 1: Ferveo Vestis! | Anonymous |
I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) |
Whimsy | 2004.11.30 - 08:31PM | 1: Ferveo Vestis! | Anonymous |
That was hilarious. Really well done. I like the idea of Draco and Harry having hexed them and I have this image in my head of them outside listening!
Author's Response: Oh dear! You almost made ME snort a beverage up my nose with that image! My fault entirely for drinking a soda while I read these! Thanks for the laugh! :) |
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