Reviews for Alone No More
bubbles28 | 2013.10.03 - 04:28PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
The story draws you in; works as a one shot, or the first chapter of a longer piece. Think about where you want it to go before you write again :) |
GoldenGem | 2011.05.19 - 09:52AM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
I agree with most of the others - this is a very believable story and I do hope you will continue with it. I enjoyed it very much. |
pathseeker | 2010.09.07 - 02:12AM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
This is a good story! I don't know why you haven 't done any more with it! Is it because you haven't gotten more reviews? You write well; the story was believable, and people liked it. What better reasons could you have for writing more? |
miss_ladywriter | 2009.10.06 - 12:10PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
Not sure if you still read reviews, but random fic turned this one up for me and I enjoyed reading it very much. My review principle is to only mention good things, and I've never brought this up before... but it honestly really gets to me - and my best friend! It's the word 'chit'. My best friend studied English at degree level, we're both English and we've genuinely never heard an English person use it, so it really jars in stories.
Otherwise, I love the way the story started, and, if it's a one-shot, it's nicely balanced to leave the imagination wandering. Thank you for bringing Hermione and Severus together in a believable way! |
Tenar10r | 2009.07.30 - 04:11PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
Echoing what some others have said, this looks to be the beginning to a great story. It is also excellent as a one-shot too btw. |
greekpeach | 2007.12.11 - 07:24PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
This is a good introduction to what could be a wonderful story. I'd like to read more.
You're good at this. |
greekpeach | 2007.12.11 - 07:24PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
This is a good introduction to what could be a wonderful story. I'd like to read more.
You're good at this. |
firewall | 2006.03.26 - 07:58AM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Anonymous |
Well it's been two years since you wrote this so I am guessing there won't be any updates. Too bad really because this definitely has possibilities and I like the flow of your writing. Should you change your mind, you've got a great start. |
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