Reviews for The Deeper View
| Leraiv Snape | 2009.04.19 - 04:29PM | 1: The End of the Affair | Signed |
| "The greatest love is the most painful and heartbreaking. The words you never hear uttered, the years you never see pass by." I am at a total loss for words. This piece is unbelievably beautiful. |
| droxy | 2004.05.29 - 02:19AM | 1: The End of the Affair | Signed |
| This is just so sad and angsty |
| Deb >^..^< SS_HG4Ever@yahoo.com | 2004.01.17 - 11:42PM | 1: | Anonymous |
| Chapters 2 & 3...... I do so hope that you will be adding more to this, especially with the way you ended chapter 3!!! The 1st chapter was so sad, the 2nd was volatile & the 3rd is looking like it's leading into something GOOOOOD!!! Hoping for more soon, Deb >^..^< |
| Clair Snape | 2003.12.14 - 08:00AM | 1: | Signed |
| Very good. I like the 'no dinner for you' part. tee hee hee. |
| Taya | 2003.11.30 - 12:38AM | 1: | Signed |
| I like this chapter better than the first one, so all I can say is very good and I look forward - as always - to more.
Great premise, good writing, and SPECTACULAR relationship...what more can you ask? ^_^ |
| Taya | 2003.11.30 - 12:31AM | 1: The End of the Affair | Signed |
| Sounds very sweet so far...it looks good, but is a little bit fragmented.
Can't wait for more! |
| rose | 2003.11.26 - 05:17PM | 1: The End of the Affair | Anonymous |
| aw, that was beautiful, *swallows the lump in my throat* I'm not going to cry... really ^_^ |
| Isobel L | 2003.11.24 - 09:16PM | 1: The End of the Affair | Anonymous |
| Beautifully written.
All the same, I wish I hadn't read it.
Very depressed now. |
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