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Reviews for Heart With No Companion

Jong_Kahn2011.08.02 - 03:54AM11: HermioneSigned
This is a terrific story! I like it a lot. But I really don't care for song fics. The first chapter's song made sense, since it held the title to your story. The second chapter's song worked for me, too. But after that, I'm afraid they've just been superfluous, distracting, and dare I say it, annoying. Please know, I mean no disrespect to you; it's just that lyrics are so subjective, meaning more to some people, and less to others. I won't criticize the song parts again, I simply had to mention it once, so I could let it go.

Keladry Lupin2005.07.16 - 05:12PM11: HermioneSigned
Ah, Les Miz. No song could be more appropriate for this chapter. I certainly understand Hermione's frustration!

ladylara2005.04.21 - 07:56AM11: HermioneSigned
I love it! I often miss such wonderful stories as I search the PWP (hehe) category. Thank you.

ladyofthemasque2004.11.01 - 04:04AM11: HermioneSigned
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE, DAMMIT!! (*waves torch VERY irately, threatening to singe eyebrows and nose-hairs if there isn't an update soon*) ~Lotm

Curly2004.10.25 - 07:40AM11: HermioneAnonymous
I love this story. The characters are so well developed. Not really sure what to make of Harry, but your Snape and Hermione are just beautiful. A few crits: It was Nettie who mentioned Beaty&Beast but later In the "library" you write that it was Poppy. Also, in this chap. the time frame seems off. At the beginning it sounds as if Hermione has been back for many days talking of the countless hours discussing cures, all her note taking, and all the times Snape avoided kissing her. One chap. that starts odd? is "One vening on her second day.." I though perhaps you meant second week or month, but realized you meant day. Perhaps it should read The evening of her second day..but still it seems to me, that a bit much has gone on for it only to be her second day back. Also when she mentions that Nettie has been reading Wuthering Heights and "one day" Hermione mentions it to him-this seems to imply more that three days of S&H communicating have passed. Following your time line Day 3 back is when they walk in the garden. Then a few days pass (" A few days Later..") is when she brings up the fairytale theory (great idea!) and he kissed her knuckles. The day after this, he tells her that he kissed her knuckles b/c he was "overwhelmed w/ the event of the day; finding you alive..." yet that was many days ago. I don't mean to sound as critical as this may look in type. I think it it one of the most creative stories I've come across in quite a while. At the beginning I couldn't understand why they didn't just use Legillmency-your explanation was so well put together and made a great twist. I can't wait to read the next few chapters, but alas I guess it's time to get off the couch and go to work.

Sabrina2004.10.22 - 06:14PM11: HermioneAnonymous
Great job. I like this story so much I thought I would review it is two places.

Ishiru2004.10.22 - 03:31PM11: HermioneAnonymous
this is fantastic story! It make me cry, it so sad. Please to continue soon. I must read again some more!

Jana2004.10.21 - 11:21PM11: HermioneAnonymous
I am dying to know if it works. Please continue soon.

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