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Reviews for Heart With No Companion

Jong_Kahn2011.08.02 - 01:54AM2: SnapeSigned
Of course this is AU: Ron is dead, Albus and Severus alive, but this is quite a good and intriguing beginning. Now that DH pt 2--and therefore, all the HP movies--are completed, Emma Watson got her hair cut shorter (probably) than Hermione's got it here (and she looks fetching!). But I love your focus on it, as something Severus and Harry want fixed, for her sake. I love their truce over Hermione, I like your exploration of Snape's feelings. Good chapter.

ninjaonfire2007.11.27 - 09:18PM2: SnapeSigned
"It was hell. Hell with lemon drops."
Best. Line. Ever.

This is such an interesting story. I love the point of view thing that you have going on. I can't wait to see Hermione's perspective. And why doesn't Harry suck it up and visit her anymore? Uncool.

detektiv2007.05.25 - 03:43AM2: SnapeSigned
Awesome! Im hooked :D

Keladry Lupin2005.07.16 - 03:43PM2: SnapeAnonymous
Boy-Who-Annoyingly-Lived-With-Horseshoes-Up-His-Ass Don't sugar coat it, Severus. Tell us how you really feel.

Heh heh heh; I like the sneaky spells Snape put on her when he visited.

quaryn2005.05.30 - 08:24AM2: SnapeSigned
I'm enjoying the story thus far, but would you please correct one mistake both you and your beta missed, and change "released to his own reconnaissance" to "released to his own recognizance"? It's a little thing, but little things mean so much in a good story.

justme2005.02.01 - 11:36PM2: SnapeSigned
I cant believe I havent read this until now! This beginning is wonderful; hopefully with unspoken promise for the future! I know its Very LONG, but I simply cant wait to finish!

Dreamlover2004.11.15 - 08:34PM2: SnapeAnonymous
A very good chapter. I like seeing things from Severus' pov. Very nice, I also like the battle field scene, very believable.

pickles2004.10.21 - 11:45AM2: SnapeAnonymous
that was great

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