Reviews for The Loom
| loreen77 | 2015.11.07 - 01:27PM | 1: Preface: Mount Olympus | Signed |
| Well done. This one feels complete. |
| Daintress | 2006.05.19 - 06:52AM | 1: Preface: Mount Olympus | Signed |
| Okay, this is a strange thing you've done. During the first half, Fate thinks of her work as a sure thing - implying that there is no free will. But later on you say what she is weaving is only her desires, and that there is a chance the tapestry will unravel. Before you go on with this story, you might want to decide which of those two concepts is true for this story. You can't have it both ways. Either they are preordained to be together or they are not, and the outcome is in question. |
| Badb | 2006.04.28 - 01:19AM | 1: Preface: Mount Olympus | Signed |
| Please continue, it has such a promising premise. |
| CiraArana | 2006.02.20 - 03:17PM | 1: Preface: Mount Olympus | Signed |
| Ooohhh ... That's a fascinating beginning. I like Her. Aren't we all Her, in our rôle as writers?
I'd like to see more of Her - and Her Creator. ^-^ |
| lalajoyous | 2005.12.01 - 12:56AM | 1: Preface: Mount Olympus | Signed |
| Wow... this isn't the end, right? |
| lalajoyous | 2005.12.01 - 12:56AM | 1: Preface: Mount Olympus | Signed |
| Wow... this isn't the end, right? |
| droxy | 2005.04.21 - 09:42PM | 1: Preface: Mount Olympus | Signed |
| hmmm interesting |
| Andie | 2005.04.08 - 12:16AM | 1: Preface: Mount Olympus | Signed |
| Excellent |
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