Reviews for Up the River
| magicalpresence | 2011.09.10 - 10:25AM | 8: Chapter Eight | Signed |
| I do wish you'd pick it back up. It is a very compelling and imaginative story, and I'm disappointed there's not more! It's never too late x |
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.12.19 - 12:12AM | 6: Chapter Six | Signed |
| Well, no worry about THAT part of his future being changed, huh? Good chapter. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.12.19 - 12:04AM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| Wow; you wrote this chapter five and one-half years ago. It's still heady stuff, too. I have just a small quibble here: wouldn't Severus remember Lily's clothes? As closely as he would watch her, surely he'd know her outfits. Therefore, wouldn't he recognize them when Hermione's wearing them? Plus I have to agree with the reviewer who observed she didn't think Hermione would 'give it up' to anyone, even a young, hot Severus, after only two days there. Still, an entertaining chapter, to be sure. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.12.18 - 11:51PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| I'm trying to find the right words here. It's not that I don't want to believe your premise; it's more that everything seems to have happened a bit too speedily for me to quite go along with it. Not that I don't love Snape and Hermione feeding each other, or their good conversation. It just feels like some of these things are forced, rushed a bit. Entertaining as hell, though! I'll still give you a "10" for great ideas, even if I feel the development of them is rushed! |
| Half Blood Outcast | 2010.11.08 - 10:19PM | 8: Chapter Eight | Signed |
| FINISH EEEEEEEEEET. . . please? This was quite interesting. Even if the dialogue seemed a bit forced and too formal at times, the story-line is interesting. I'd really like to see this finished! |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2009.09.19 - 03:24AM | 6: Chapter Six | Signed |
| WHAT? Morsmordre?
am comfused..... is that a mistake you made or did you delibratly write that name I mean shouldnt that be Voldemort instead? is Morsmordre is some kind of code or fake name she uses for him ito tell Dumbledore instead?
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| verasuspense | 2009.09.17 - 02:05AM | 8: Chapter Eight | Signed |
| If you never finish this, it could still stand as complete just the way it is. I mean, it would be nice if Hermione's perception potion somehow kills Voldemort, maybe by making him perceive just what a grotesque monster he has become, but its not necessary. |
| verasuspense | 2009.09.17 - 01:59AM | 7: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| "A clever man commits no minor blunders". That is certainly true of Severus, and of Dumbledore. Their blunders were major. |
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