Reviews for Til Nothing Comes Between Us
| worrywart | 2012.06.16 - 09:47AM | 1: In The Beginning | Signed |
| A nice start! I look forward to more. |
| Dziude | 2011.05.28 - 01:35AM | 1: In The Beginning | Signed |
| It's been years since this was posted.... so I assume it has been abandoned, which is a real shame. I would love to see where it would go from here. Intriguing. |
| jazzjackrabbit | 2006.07.31 - 12:32PM | 1: In The Beginning | Signed |
| i think it is abondoned....its good written i believe and i hope the writer continues:::sighs:::: |
| Kemayta | 2006.06.21 - 10:41AM | 1: In The Beginning | Signed |
| Interesting, quite intriguing really. I hope you post more soon, this has got promise! Cheers! |
| lesia | 2006.06.03 - 09:37AM | 1: In The Beginning | Signed |
| Apparently Snape has not gotten a backbone and be able to say no and mean it. |
| Sariah Snape | 2005.08.09 - 11:24PM | 1: In The Beginning | Signed |
| very good. i look forward to more. |
| The Eighth Weasley | 2005.03.11 - 07:39PM | 1: In The Beginning | Signed |
| Erm... Snape's a little out of character. Canon Snape reacts a little more slowly, lets things build up and simmer before exploding. In fact, he's rarely exploded: PoA is the only time I can recall him doing so; there's the scene at the end of GoF when he pulls up his sleeve to show Fudge the Mark, but that was still contained.
Also, the "At least I will get to see her..." bit was a tad too forced. If you were to revise this chapter, I'd recommend expanding that bit with a few thoughts of how he's admired her, or similar. We know who he's looking forward to seeing (this is Ashwinder, after all :)), so there's no point in being subtle, is there?
Anyway, I hope you continue writing! |
| Sabrina | 2004.09.22 - 02:08AM | 1: In The Beginning | Anonymous |
| Please, Please, Please update. |
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