Reviews for Doubts and Desires
| Amortentia | 2021.02.13 - 09:04AM | 24: Epilogue | Signed |
| Well done. I enjoyed your writing. |
| kudlatek | 2017.10.12 - 07:05AM | 24: Epilogue | Signed |
| Nice story. I loved the seductive Severus, but Hermione abandoning her friends and running to France was... disappointing a bit. Nevertheless, I did enjoy your fic. Thank you for the great reading! |
| breastlady | 2016.03.13 - 07:34PM | 14: An Unusual Request | Signed |
| I'm very happy for Severus and Hermione but I have a question. Poppy seemed to be available 24/7. What happens if a child gets sick in the middle of the night and Hermione is with Severus? Do they have a magical way for her to know there is a child in need? Having been a mom kids get sick at night more often than in the day. |
| breastlady | 2016.03.13 - 12:51AM | 10: Some Normalcy Returns | Signed |
| Whoohooo!! for Severus! I'm so happy for him. He probably also has some PTSD from the war no matter how much he has pushed it down. Now I hope Hermione will feel like she can make a move that will signal to Severus she would open to being more than just friends with him. I'm sorry for Harry too. As Severus feels better I can spare some sympathy for Harry now. |
| breastlady | 2016.03.13 - 12:41AM | 9: First Date | Signed |
| It was a lovely date! Anticipation is great. |
| breastlady | 2016.03.13 - 12:22AM | 7: Doubting Severus | Signed |
| Oh yeh...There's that professionally appropriate behavior thing. Damn! She's technically right. But we really want them to become a couple and this is as good a reason as any for them to realize they are compatible. His feelings are going to be hurt. I hope she explains to him she shouldn't take advantage of his vulnerable emotional state but that otherwise she would really like to get to know him on a personal and intimate level. Will he be able to be rational or will he feel personally rejected? Maybe they could put a time limit like, as soon as you can brew again we can date if you would like to. |
| breastlady | 2016.03.13 - 12:03AM | 6: Trying to Deal | Signed |
| I'm really enjoying this story. I am sorry for Severus and Hermione. They are both fighting their perfectionistic traits. Both of them are used to being practically perfect at everything. They both care very much about their charges. I hope this draws them together as a couple and they and provide strength for each other. |
| breastlady | 2016.03.12 - 08:34PM | 3: Great Feasts and New Beginnings | Signed |
| I think I may have read this story a long time ago but I'm not sure. I'm really enjoying the pace and the character development. It's also nice not to have to worry about all the sorrows that come with cannon and all the deaths. I like having Albus still alive. And I like that remembering the Weasley twins is fun and not laced with the tragedy at the loss of one of them knowing they will never play pranks again. It sounds like Ron isn't with us but if only one person had to die so that the many, many others could survive that is a sad but fair trade. |
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