Reviews for The Seven Transgressions
loreen77 | 2016.10.24 - 07:27PM | 3: Antivenin | Signed |
My stories have described them swapping spit, but never quite like that. Lol. Intense start. |
Jensteed | 2015.02.19 - 06:10PM | 3: Antivenin | Signed |
Alphafemale got it just right for me, it did make me a bit queasy but it's meant as a compliment ;)
I had to read this twice because my eyes somehow skipped him spitting and I read him closing her airway. It seemed that he was giving her mercy on the battlefield. Visceral and intriguing...and just a little squicky, haha |
alphafemale | 2007.05.29 - 02:54PM | 3: Antivenin | Signed |
This episode made me a little queasy. I'm not sure why. As much as I love any connection between Snape and Hermione, somehow spit seems more... primitive? Less romantic? And yet maybe more so for it being less so. My words don't make much sense. But I did mean queasy as a compliment. Visceral. |
LadyJaneGrey | 2007.04.12 - 08:21PM | 3: Antivenin | Signed |
These are so...voyeuristic...your writing is so amazing and so clear and makes you feel like you're there, the plot lines, the characters - and your twists! These stories demand attention. |
squeeeze | 2006.05.19 - 01:02PM | 3: Antivenin | Signed |
These stories-with - a twist are just so powerful, the images leap out at you. You really do have a fertile imagination, hope you´ve written more stuff. |
droxy | 2006.02.22 - 10:09PM | 3: Antivenin | Signed |
Field medicine is not for the weak. Excellent drama. |
tisasil | 2005.05.10 - 12:44PM | 3: Antivenin | Signed |
This was an incredible little chapter. Very powerful. |
Black Aliss | 2005.03.18 - 04:34PM | 3: Antivenin | Signed |
Well..I'm saving these stories in my "favorites", you are a magnificent writer..I won't even ask where you get the ideas but you are EXCELLENT! What a range! I will look for your work..do you post elsewhere?? And so this isn't a pretty story..so what! It is powerful. Thanks. |
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