Reviews for Sexual Understanding
| Very Small Prophet | 2013.05.10 - 12:44AM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| Very sexy! I trust they are both intelligent enough to know that one should never take seriously any emotional statement made immediately after orgasm. If they continue to say "I love you" in the cold light of day, after months of seeing each other outside the bedroom as well as in, it might mean something, but when you're high on endorphins you'll say anything. |
| jrzygirl12 | 2011.02.17 - 05:02AM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| Hot and sweet at the same time...LOVED IT! Thanks :) |
| Alexa1993 | 2011.01.04 - 04:38PM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| ♥♥♥♥♥ |
| Tangerine Dream | 2010.08.11 - 06:07PM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| Love this story!! Very hot & erotic! But love the fluffy happy ending too! |
| mikomikko | 2010.01.16 - 11:08AM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| ow... super nice ending. though it's a PWP, really like the ending part hehe. i bet you can extend your story. like maybe you can start writing from the beginning why herm loves sev and their conflicts, climax and include some sex parts you used in this story in the middle or what. hehe |
| tonksinger | 2009.06.16 - 12:46AM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| Plenty of very hot sex, but the lovey-doveyness was just ridiculous. Sorry, but one of my pet peeves with this ship is the "OMG we just had sex for the first time and now we're in love, even though there was no relationship at all previous to this" trope which happens far too often. Severus lost all his bite the moment he walked in her door, and the OOCness just continued from there. Great sex, though. Just needs some characterisation work. |
| FascinatingSnape | 2009.01.07 - 02:01PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| Damn, that was hot. Thanx. |
| LoveFenrir | 2009.01.06 - 05:55PM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| The random declarations of love were a bit out of character for someone so bitter like Snape and someone so smart like Hermione... A lot of potential for improvement, maybe shifting the "i <3 u" stuff till later... maybe if you changed the structur eof the story to a vignette -style where it's ok to have massive gaps in plot development... but, all in all, pretty good... |
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