Reviews for Cycad
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.05.05 - 01:08PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| Sorry. Not two chapters to post, you were going to post "within the next two days". Ah well... |
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.05.05 - 01:07PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| I'm really sorry you've abandoned this; it was quite a promising beginning. Also (trying not to have a whiny tone), you did have a note that you had two more chapters ready. Alas, that was not to be, apparently. I realize I'm a 'lone voice crying in the wilderness' here, but won't you please reconsider at least posting whatever else you had? Thanks for all the work you did, anyway. |
| Aurora | 2006.06.01 - 02:40AM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| An intriguing beginning. I'd sure like to read more... |
| pickles | 2006.05.08 - 08:44PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| I like her retort - “It’s Mrs Snape… now,” as she twirled the plain band on her finger.
and his response “It does not take a master of Occulmens to know that you are no wife to me”
I wanted to club him on the head. She didn't say anything about being a wife. Just showing her new name and new position in the wizarding world. waiting for more. p |
| clairex14 | 2006.05.06 - 05:54PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| this is cool. I like how you went straight into the story without all the tedious and cliche details of the Marriage law. It will be interesting to see where you take this story.
keep writing!! update soon! |
| Daintress | 2006.01.07 - 02:56PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| At the beginning of this chapter, she's barefoot, but in the middle she's shuffling her shoes. You might want to mention it, if she stood up or something, and put them on, because otherwise it just sounds like you forgot what you'd already written..... |
| Mollie | 2005.08.14 - 11:02PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| Oh come one, tell me that you didn't totally stop writing there?!? You should definately continue. It is wonderful. |
| poochiepoo | 2005.07.27 - 02:03PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| Love it...wanna read more...please add some soon...thx. |
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