Reviews for A Choice of Roads
Jong_Kahn | 2021.10.16 - 03:47AM | 17: Time Apart | Signed |
I absolutely loved the crow feelings of wanting to do a courtship dance, showing off his plumage--then wanting to let Hermione know he could build a nest! Great chapter! |
L_Daemon_07 | 2011.10.25 - 03:36PM | 17: Time Apart | Signed |
"There was also the alarming urge to try and prove to her that he could build a nest…"
I lol'd at that! awesome line!
I'm really enjoying this fic, i was a bit peeved at how he left her at the restaurant and I'm glad he apologized.
I think they're really sweet together. good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. :) |
ElectricBloo | 2008.03.27 - 07:03PM | 17: Time Apart | Signed |
Cheers for posting. |
Prof M McGonagall | 2007.11.17 - 09:49PM | 17: Time Apart | Signed |
I loved the gentle way you ended this chapter. |
journeymom | 2006.05.31 - 01:43AM | 17: Time Apart | Signed |
"as if it was beneath me to be in the same room as Hermione" In context I think you mean" as if it was beneath Hermione to be in the same room as me" ? This is thoroughly enjoyable. |
MollysSister | 2005.11.20 - 11:16PM | 17: Time Apart | Signed |
Servus Crow's alarming need to show Hermoine that he could built a nest? snort. you have me laughing out loud! I love their tender buding romance. I am curious about when she will tell him how she flashed forward in time. A lovely tale you are begining here! write on!
Author's Response: Thanks! |
Shella LaRoche | 2005.04.27 - 04:39AM | 17: Time Apart | Signed |
Oh my...! Crow Severus nearly falling from a branch - now you are to blame for my belly-ache I got from laughing too hard. Please finish this story quickly. I must say that I grow more fond of your writing with every story I read. |
kissofcuteness | 2004.11.15 - 09:12PM | 17: Time Apart | Anonymous |
Really really good story. Sorry I didn't review as I went along. I like the character development you show and how Severus' and Hermione's relationship is developing. I also liked your portrayal of Harry (I don't really like him). Can't wait for another chpater. |
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