Reviews for Time Changes Everything
LovesRickman | 2014.10.20 - 11:31PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
I adored this! Love your focus!
MISSY aka LovesRickman |
deedeebug95 | 2012.04.11 - 02:05AM | 9: Nine | Signed |
Sweet fluff!! |
deedeebug95 | 2012.04.11 - 02:01AM | 8: Eight | Signed |
OOC,yes but in a good way and sometimes it is good for Sev. to let his hair downso to speak!! Squee!!!!! |
Jenniemay | 2011.09.08 - 06:22PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
Still wishing there was more |
Jenniemay | 2011.09.08 - 06:22PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
Still wishing there was more |
Jong_Kahn | 2011.04.29 - 01:40PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
I enjoyed this story. I guess I didn't find your Severus OOC so much as I did your Hermione. Canon Hermione does not strike me as the kind of girl who would allow herself to get knocked up before marriage, not just once, but TWICE?! She's too much of a swot not to take proper precautions (not to mention she knows more spells and potions than anyone else her age, so she could do so EASILY.) That's why I say your HG is OOC. But your little tale was fun to read, fluffy indeed. Thanks for writing it! |
Jong_Kahn | 2011.04.29 - 01:18PM | 3: Three | Signed |
This is going to be funny, I can tell. But having seen a bit more of Hermione's home life, I wonder what Hermione ever saw in Justin--or did he rape her? Probably not, as you'd have addressed that already. Plus even with a bad husband like F-F (for short), I would think that any child of Hermione's would be better behaved or less whiny than Charlotte appears to be. Hermione's too disciplined not to handle her child the same way her own mother did (i.e., with discipline as well as love). Just observations--I still liked the chapter a lot. |
Jong_Kahn | 2011.04.29 - 01:08PM | 2: Two | Signed |
Good chapter, but I cannot believe that Snape would allow a four-year-old to address him by his first name, not even to spite Hermione. He enjoys holding an iron hand over children too much--especially if Charlotte will no doubt end up being one of his pupils. It would set a bad precedent, one he would never want set. Still, a well-written chapter, and a "10" for you. |
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