Reviews for The Loyal Servant
SeverusHermione394 | 2019.07.26 - 02:35PM | 1: The Loyal Servant | Signed |
Absolutely amazing... well written and the POV was different too |
hayam | 2014.08.27 - 06:35PM | 1: The Loyal Servant | Signed |
Liked it! |
Jong_Kahn | 2013.11.28 - 11:26PM | 1: The Loyal Servant | Signed |
I'm sorry Harry had to die--but not Severus! Good story--thank you! |
fynnsmom | 2010.07.29 - 11:48AM | 1: The Loyal Servant | Signed |
I really liked this story. Once again, Voldemort's arrogance killed him. That was very creative. I hope to read more of your stories soon. |
loreen77 | 2010.07.21 - 09:45PM | 1: The Loyal Servant | Signed |
interesting perspective. I enjoyed it, but I agree the 2nd person made it a little awkward. I understand why you used it based on the challenge requirements. I loved the one word "everything"...I can just hear it in my mind in Rickman's voice...yummy. |
bubblybabs | 2009.11.19 - 07:22PM | 1: The Loyal Servant | Signed |
Interesting perspective... |
verasuspense | 2008.08.20 - 10:37AM | 1: The Loyal Servant | Signed |
Running at Voldemort screaming and waving a sword is exactly what one would expect of Harry. He never can keep his cool in a crisis. |
LilithTavari | 2008.05.13 - 03:27AM | 1: The Loyal Servant | Signed |
A little confusing, but overall very well done! "Everything." AH! I died a little at that. Through the minds of his fangirls, Severus speaks some of the most moving lines ever. Bravo. |
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