Reviews for An Inconvenient Marriage
Andrian | 2004.04.12 - 07:46AM | 1: A Beginning | Signed |
Yes I concur. Its a nice different approach
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) |
Estrilda | 2004.04.12 - 06:51AM | 1: A Beginning | Signed |
what a great opening. I like that you skimmed over the preliminaries as we have all read them so many times already and seem to be moving to something very interesting. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. :) |
Tangerine Python | 2004.04.12 - 04:09AM | 1: A Beginning | Signed |
Fantastic start babe! I just love it when Sevvie is forced to act on his natural hedonism, bit of heartbreaker though! Better update soon or Ill be forced to do something neither of us would enjoy! Thats not a threat though, its just that begging and crying is hard on my knees and potentially embarissing for you!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. :) |
droxy | 2004.04.12 - 03:00AM | 1: A Beginning | Signed |
OMG, HG married to a canon Snape. He's said some nasty and cruel things. It will be interesting to see how this works out.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) |
Bambu | 2004.04.12 - 02:48AM | 1: A Beginning | Signed |
This is quite heartbreaking. A lovely shift from the norm in this challenge. It will be most interesting to see where you take it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) |
Azulkan2 | 2004.04.12 - 01:51AM | 1: A Beginning | Signed |
What a sad story. I think if I were Hermione I would be hard pressed not to end it all.
Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) |
LackingWings | 2004.04.12 - 01:46AM | 1: A Beginning | Signed |
I've read numerous marriage fics, many so similar that they've now become muddled in my head. I was so excited to read something unique! I thought your opening was fantastic, and the first person perspective was wonderfully...personal, for lack of better word. You conveyed such powerful emotion that I couldn't help feeling terrible for Hermione, which is a first for me with this challenge! (Usually Hermione is mortified at the thought of marrying Severus...which is not enough of an excuse for me to muster up feelings of sympathy lol.) I so enjoyed reading this, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things develop between our couple.
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. :) |
MysticRaven | 2004.04.12 - 12:18AM | 1: A Beginning | Signed |
Wow - this sure is a completely different twist on that challenge! I look forward to reading any future chapters you choose to write!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. :) |
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