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Reviews for I Don't Want To Be Alone

Porrie132010.09.28 - 06:26PM18: StrengthsSigned
He apologized? Wow! I wasn't expecting that!!

lawless3142004.06.25 - 01:36AM18: StrengthsAnonymous
Hmmm...back in Chp 13, it said Longbottom wasn't in Potions anymore...and yet here he is in the class in Chp 18! *tickle*

Savageland2004.05.24 - 06:31PM18: StrengthsSigned
I've been meaning to read this story for ages. I'm really enjoying how you use dialogue to help convey the characters' feelings and states of mind without relying too much on description--though I hasten to add that the descriptions are deliciously concise--I esp. liked the "hair ribbon" bit--LOL! Love the tension you're building up between Snape and Hermione; nice and slow! I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. I realise in some chapters that I rely a lot on dialogue, which I hope is different in my other stories. And who knows, maybe one day she'll get to suggest the hair ribbon? Thanks for that review!

devsgma2004.04.21 - 07:27PM18: StrengthsSigned
I'm impressed he recognized he was in the wrong, let alone appoligize to her. All right. There's hope yet.

Crescentmoon2004.04.10 - 11:43AM18: StrengthsSigned
Oo! Great story. I can't wait to read more!

Bambu2004.04.10 - 03:31AM18: StrengthsSigned
Wow! He apologizes, surely difficult for him, but what a backhand at the end. Well, a little paradigm shift never hurt anyone! I'm glad your PC is back, and am very interested in what you do with Hermione and Ron.




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