Reviews for How's a Girl Supposed to Decide? Part II
| loreen77 | 2015.10.23 - 09:49PM | 1: 1 | Signed |
| The peach cobbler eating, lol very funny. |
| FreeWinky | 2013.07.12 - 12:35AM | 4: A wolf, a potions master and a decision | Signed |
| Severus! She definitely chose Severus! |
| hot_stuff11 | 2013.05.08 - 12:12PM | 4: A wolf, a potions master and a decision | Signed |
| I don't blame you for leaving it open-ended. How in the world WOULD she choose, with those men as her options? I think it was a GREAT way to end it. This way, the reader can fill in the blanks however he/she chooses! One tiny note: I think it would be better (easier on the eyes, etc) to denote inner thoughts with italics, rather than quotation marks, as in here: ‘What was the little minx up to?’ That's just my personal preference, though, of course. :) |
| hot_stuff11 | 2013.05.08 - 12:05PM | 3: Potions and pleasures | Signed |
| Oh, I love how he changes back post-O. So funny! Good thing Hermione has been wanting him anyway! |
| hot_stuff11 | 2013.05.08 - 11:59AM | 2: Peepholes and Ideas | Signed |
| Naughty, naughty Sev! Planning on Polyjuicing Sirius...Not that I blame him, I'd probably at least consider the same thing. Although, I can't help wishing he'd just seduce her in his own form. She obviously wants him. Or has he forgotten the peach? And the "I tried, but he didn't show any interest?" line? Oh, Sev, she means you, silly! :P |
| hot_stuff11 | 2013.05.08 - 11:55AM | 1: 1 | Signed |
| What a tease she is! Poor Severus. I'm sure he'll "come" into his own with her, though. The way she ate the peach, and his reaction...damn sexy! |
| ChunkyCheese | 2012.04.18 - 12:17AM | 4: A wolf, a potions master and a decision | Signed |
| I think it was Sirius because he made her grin. HATE that you didn't say who she picked, would rather know than imagine. |
| loreen77 | 2010.12.15 - 11:00PM | 4: A wolf, a potions master and a decision | Signed |
| great ending.........who would I pick? depends on the day....can't I have them All? steamy. loved it. |
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