Reviews for Bitter Hearts
| Alison33 | 2017.11.29 - 07:41PM | 25: One Year Anniversary | Signed |
| I like the story, but you have a “continuity” error. If the baby was conceived the day Mark died she would be about 3 months old on the anniversary of his death. Babies don’t generally roll over until 4 months or move in a deliberate direction until much later. |
| borednow | 2015.08.23 - 02:19AM | 46: Epilogue | Signed |
| Yay! I can't believe how fast I read this. It was so cute. I just love this story! |
| borednow | 2015.08.22 - 04:57PM | 22: New Year's Eve | Signed |
| Ow my heart. The squee, oh the SQUEE! This is my favorite. |
| borednow | 2015.08.22 - 04:34PM | 18: Snow Day | Signed |
| Oh my goodness, from the way you described the little snow fight, all I could picture was that scene from Beauty and the Beast where he gets hit with a snowball and all the birds are playing with him... So cute. |
| borednow | 2015.08.22 - 09:25AM | 10: Drinking with Remus | Signed |
| I've read this story before but it was a long time ago. I just wanted to compliment you on the way you've built the backstory to this fic- in many I read, hermione's history seems forced and Snape is either a parody of himself or quite out of character. I feel that you've achieved a good dose of realism with this fic and it is easy to become invested in the characters and story. Sometimes when I read other HGSS I find myself skipping paragraphs of badly written prose to get to the good stuff but that's not the case with your story. Very nicely done. |
| marisamarinee | 2014.10.20 - 03:50AM | 45: Now and Forever | Signed |
| Sweet. |
| marisamarinee | 2014.10.19 - 10:17PM | 24: Easter Holiday | Signed |
| Aww Marka's so sweet! I see she's possessive of Sev. |
| marisamarinee | 2014.10.19 - 06:34PM | 12: The Girl Next Door | Signed |
| Aww Maka seems attached |
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