Reviews for Mosaics
| ickle_cat | 2020.03.06 - 10:30AM | 9: nine | Signed |
| oh no, a cliffhanger. guess that's what I deserved for reading an incomplete. Would have loved to read the rest x |
| ickle_cat | 2020.02.24 - 01:47PM | 2: Chapter two | Signed |
| ok so this lucius is a bad person but also I'm kinda glad he's able to live with his disability and overcome his fear of being with his wife, it's actually super nice even if he is an arse |
| loreen77 | 2018.07.11 - 08:21AM | 9: nine | Signed |
| I was aware of the unfinished nature of this story when I start. But I am glad I still gave it a chance. I enjoyed your ideas and especially like the portions about mage magic. You have a lot of good plot concepts and as I read damaged good then this I can see your writing technique and style improve. I hope you still write, even if it’s not here. Nice job. |
| loreen77 | 2018.07.08 - 10:30PM | 1: one | Signed |
| Just reread part one and realized I never read this part. While I know it’s unfinished I am still interested in reading what I can. Part one was very fascinating and I look forward to this as well. |
| Jensteed | 2015.03.25 - 05:17PM | 9: nine | Signed |
| It's a pity you abandoned this, it does need some work but it was a good read. |
| Rookseer | 2013.05.08 - 12:19AM | 9: nine | Signed |
| Please, please dont abandon this story!!! Im anxious to find out about the other 2 elemetums and who the little boy really is.....its a good story. |
| Derelict Author | 2012.04.10 - 10:27AM | 9: nine | Signed |
| I was going through my favorites list, realizing how much my tastes have changed and grown over time. I wonder why I had not had Damaged Goods favorited, and realized it was that sort of indulgent "torture porn" that doesn't serve as cartharsis to read, but more as guilty reading. However, Mosaics IS very different--your writing clearly improved, got smoother, and you weaved a rather interesting plot together; I think my favorite parts of this story were the inclusion of Morana Malfoy, as I've never seen anything quite like it in fic. Though the story had some weakness and OOC-ness, it didn't have nearly as much as Damaged Goods, and became quite an interesting story. It's a shame it looks like it will never be finished. |
| GoldenGem | 2011.06.08 - 03:18PM | 9: nine | Signed |
| I really must learn to look at the last update on a story before reading it. I find it so annoying to get through 9 chapters only to find the work has been abandoned. It's about time Ashwinder did something about all these long abandoned stories.
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