Reviews for The Activist
sandpiper | 2023.03.11 - 03:46AM | 7: Seven | Signed |
Until Severus and Hermione got married I thought there was some caveat against muggle marriage, but then they did and the consummation was not needed AND they had two years to conceive, so why on earth didn't everyone do just that from the start? Since the documents can be magically forged. Everyone would have two years to overturn the law. Not to mention the idea of telling Fudge beforehand. What stopped him from simply making amendments to the law instead of caving?
Sorry, sorry, the story is well written (except for the ritual humiliation of Snape), so it bugs me when I see things that seem like logical inconsistencies. |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.02.26 - 11:08AM | 7: Seven | Signed |
Aww--I'm kinda disappointed they didn't get to have any sex. Even drunken stupid sex. It can be fun, after all, which is something both our hero and heroine could use. |
molnini | 2012.09.03 - 09:18PM | 7: Seven | Signed |
The banter in this Charter was just brilliant. |
cherrypop | 2007.08.28 - 03:43PM | 7: Seven | Signed |
Loved this story! Only one problem though... in the UK you have to be married for at least a year to be divorced, and then the process takes over 4 months. Sorry! |
tallan | 2006.03.07 - 06:03PM | 7: Seven | Signed |
Oh dear lord. Oh, you were a very nasty man! But I had a crush on you anyway. I was a silly, silly little schoolgirl. And the whole what she did discussion! Hilarious. Oh, my stomach hurts now. |
TJ | 2004.09.28 - 12:36PM | 7: Seven | Anonymous |
Great chapter |
Corazon | 2004.03.23 - 01:06PM | 7: Seven | Signed |
Rilla, darling, I have enjoyed this story a lot! I would love to read more about Hermione's school girl crush, but I did love the part of Severus teasing her about the Head Girl reputation! Hugs,
Corazon |
Lucie | 2004.03.23 - 08:55AM | 7: Seven | Anonymous |
Brillianr, as always!
Your take on this particular challenge ist refreshingly different.
Let's see what you have up your sleeve for the epilogue ... *gg* |
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