Reviews for Tonight You're Mine Completely Part III
loreen77 | 2018.12.22 - 10:04AM | 5: Blame It On The Bubbles | Signed |
I have been away from Ashwinder for several months and am happy to be able to be back. I was glad to see several new chapters to your story. I found Albus’ sex talk with Hermione awkward and funny. Elf’s desire to bring together Severus and Hermione is sweet to see. I think if Elf has her way they will be mated and have babies as quickly as possible.
Author's Response: Hi Loreen,
Thank you for the review. Yes, Elf is most anxious to have a little one to take care, but she will have to wait. Finally, I have a chapter in the queue. Not having a beta reader, it takes me longer to get a chapter completed, because my eyes read what should be there and not what really is. joannie |
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