Reviews for I Don't Want To Be Alone
Porrie13 | 2010.09.28 - 04:43PM | 16: Bottled Up | Signed |
I like how you described the Bloody Baron? Did J. K. ever really mention how he died? I like all the confliction between Hermione and Severus before their romance. Well done!! |
LovesThePotionBoy | 2004.03.17 - 07:13AM | 16: Bottled Up | Anonymous |
I very much liked your take on The Bloody Baron! An excellent chapter, well worth waiting for. Am impressed. Hope your PC problems quit it soon! Love, Kait x
Author's Response: Thanks, it's one of my more liked chapters. :) I hope my comp begins to co-operate too, am currently downloading something to see if it helps. |
HeavenStone | 2004.03.16 - 09:41PM | 16: Bottled Up | Signed |
Hey, great story so far. I'm enjoying it immensely. I particularly like how you don't rush forward with the whole "romance" factor and take time to let a plot unfold. Can't wait to see what happens next! Good luck with your computer. ^_^
Author's Response: Oh, believe me, this is going to be a slow story. My first one too, so it's a bit experimental and has absolutely no direction...except when I write stressed out e-mails to my beta and she ladles some out. I know where this story will end (eventually) though and how it's sequel will start. Thanks for the luck and the review. |
Bambu | 2004.03.16 - 09:37PM | 16: Bottled Up | Anonymous |
I really enjoy this story. You've done a great job of describing Hermione's isolation, and Severus' distancing himself from her. I love that she told him off. He deserved it. Hmmm. Interesting Professor Sinistra... I wonder how you're going to use her.
Author's Response: Yes, it was due time for a good telling-off. I like Sinistra too, so I'm glad you liked the characterisation. Thanks for your review. |
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