Reviews for Repentance
loreen77 | 2018.04.14 - 04:43AM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
One down. But still poor confused dad. I hope they can straighten it out vi have never read a story where reversal work on one parent but not the other. Very interesting twist. |
Ghislaine | 2018.04.08 - 12:28AM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
I was so worried that Hermione's mother wouldn't remember her. Whew. Now we just have to worry about her father. Good writing to put me on edge like that. |
Mikimoto | 2018.04.05 - 05:08PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
It is always tough when you are messing with someone's free will. At least it seems her mom's ok. |
Melusin | 2018.03.30 - 04:13PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
Interesting start. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy the next chapter. ^-^ |
Jong_Kahn | 2018.03.29 - 12:14AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
Well, that's certainly an action-packed beginning. I await the next chapter!
Author's Response: I hope the following chapter is to your liking! Thank you ever so much for taking the time to review. ^-^ |
loreen77 | 2018.03.28 - 03:50PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
I really like how this starts and I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed the beginning. I hope the next won't disappoint. Thank you so much for taking the time to review! ^-^ |
Ghislaine | 2018.03.28 - 12:17AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
What a very promising start to your story. I can't wait to see how they get on in Australia. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Next chapter has been submitted, currently awaiting approval! I hope it won't disappoint. Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! ^-^ |
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