Ashwinder :: To bewitch the mind and ensnare the senses

Reviews for Getting the Best of the Gloomilows

joannie	2018.09.09 - 02:24PM	12: Two Princes	Signed
I am finding the depth to which you have thought out the workings of the Wizarding world is amazing. Because it has depth, I keep reading; I should have left you a review after every chapter as each one gets better. Your explanations are plausible. I think of Occlumency has put up distractions and thoroughly ridding your mind of thoughts you do not want to have exposed. But your explanation of walls, threads and following emotions blows my mind away. You have obviously given a great deal of thought in formulating your strategy. Your character development is a joy to watch unfolding. I hope I am able to keep reading your story, because it is intriguing. If I find a story that too similar to mine, I make myself stop reading it. joannie Author's Response: Thank you ! :) I'm glad you have found the story and enjoy reading it. Occlumency and Legilimency have fascinated me in HP and all the fanfics. Canon doesn't give us much to work with. I think the 'clearing of the mind' thing does play an important role in occluding. Though its's kind of hard not to think of a pink elephant if you keep thinking: Whatever you do - do not think of a pink elephant right now!!! :) And it's kind of hard not to think at all, too. :)

The chat	2018.04.03 - 04:58PM	12: Two Princes	Signed
This fic is amazing! I have been looking for a properly good one for so long! However, I didn't notice that it was not completed when I started reading and am not copping well with the suspense. I need the next part!!! Author's Response: It is finished! I just like having at least two reviews before I post the next chapters, just so that I know that there are still people out there who are actually following it. :) As with your kind review, I now have those two, I just posted the next chapter. It might take a couple of hours before it appears, as it must be approved by the admins. Thank you for your comment and compliments!

loreen77	2018.03.26 - 11:51PM	12: Two Princes	Signed
What an enlightening chapter and conversation. I love how you look at each detail in such an in-depth manner. Really fleshing out the back story and history adds so much for us as readers. Great job. Author's Response: Thank you for being such a faithful reader and reviewer!