Reviews for Time Will Follow
|emcnary||2018.01.07 - 12:05AM||6: Threading the Loop||Signed |
|Gah!!! I came back the same day to read the other chapters because I couldn't wait--now I can't wait for the next chap!!!
I love how you use the theory of the time loop like in PoA, it makes a great deal of sense. And Severus' little slip calling her "Hermione" just before she left was a wonderful foreshadowing of their coming relationship. I love everything about this so far: the build up of her time travel, her feelings about her relationship with Ron, the tortured existence of Severus that final year...all great. I'm excited to see how this all plays out. |
Author's Response: Thanks! The next one will be up soon!
|loreen77||2018.01.04 - 10:48PM||6: Threading the Loop||Signed |
|I wondered if she would have to stay and wait for time to play out. The way he slipped up with her name when he talked with her in the future made me suspect. Great chapter. I really liked how the dialogue flowed. |
Author's Response: Yes, they will become a bit more comfortable with one another.... ;-)