Reviews for Dismantle the Sun, Book One
|emcnary||2018.01.12 - 06:31AM||5: Chapter Five||Signed |
|Very interesting that they are using an online forum to rally the resistance and communicate--a very clever form of communication that the enemy (full of pure-bloods) would be ignorant about. And poor Severus. I'm very curious to see when they cross paths. Well done chapter. |
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was a huge relief to get to Severus in the chapter. And the forums were fun! The Muggle Resistance is very important. ;)
|Brooklynhills97||2018.01.09 - 10:09AM||5: Chapter Five||Signed |
|Amazing, please continue!!!|
Author's Response: Thank you, Brooklyn! =) =) =) I have submitted chapter six, it's just undergoing validation, I suppose. It is live on FFN, though, if you want to check it out. My username is omfaye on there, and the title is the same. Thank you for reading! And I really appreciate the feedback, it keeps me going!! ^^ I hope you have a good day!
|amber5||2018.01.04 - 12:35PM||5: Chapter Five||Signed |
|Really well written. It kept my attention from the start. I canít wait until you put up more chapters!|
Author's Response: Hi, Amber! Thank you so much! I really appreciate your taking the time to read and review, so much! ^^ I am working on chapter six, and I hope to be finished with it sometime this next week. I hope you're well and thank you again!
|loreen77||2017.12.31 - 07:55AM||5: Chapter Five||Signed |
|I really like the character development so far. Well done!|
Author's Response: Thank you, Loreen! I really really appreciate it. Character development is my favorite part, absolutely. Happy New Year's Eve! :)