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Reviews for Dismantle the Sun, Book One

emcnary2018.01.11 - 03:33PM3: Chapter ThreeSigned
This is a really interesting fic--not the usual, which is a good thing. The description of their time held captive by death eaters in the first chapter is well done, giving a clear picture of the terror and hell they went through without being over-done. Good job using powerful narrative rather than gore to get the point across. Hermione' s time on the run is full of detailed description that I kept waiting to get boring, but it didn't. Instead of dragging, it did a great job of making the reader feel for Hermione. I was very worried for a moment that her friend wasn't going to be a friend at all! I'm glad for him, but I can't help but feel this is the calm before her storm begins again. I'm very curious to keep reading.

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, emcnary! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. It helps me get motivated to write more. ^^ I have rewritten the first three chapters so many times, lol, that I feel like it does drag a bit, and it makes me feel better for you to say that it doesn't. Chapter four is quite different! I hope that you enjoy the rest of the chapters up! I am working on chapter 7 and hope to post it soon. =) Have a good day!

loreen772017.12.20 - 10:53PM3: Chapter ThreeSigned
I like him. He is sweet and I am glad he found her. I am enjoying this story and look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you, Loreen! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review! I apologize that it's taken me so long to respond, it has been a crazy holiday. I will update soon! :)




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