Reviews for Getting the Best of the Gloomilows
raj | 2017.12.19 - 08:38AM | 5: Detention | Signed |
Another great chapter! The conversations between these two are so well written, both when they are having a significant discussion and when it's more of a casual chat. And I just love Luna's continued contribution to the unfolding of the story. :) Lovely work!
Author's Response: I love Luna! She's really special and I like her entirely different view of the world. Luna will continue to play a role in this. :)
Thank you for your lovely comment!
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Ghislaine | 2017.12.18 - 01:05AM | 5: Detention | Signed |
I am enjoying this so much. You're writing both of these characters as the very intelligent people they are meant to be. Please finish this, because I cannot wait to see what happens next. They deserve to be happy, and I think you can give them a believable future together.
Author's Response: I can vouch for their future together ;) I also believe that - despite their age difference - they have much in common. I'm usually not into teacher-pupil relationships, but I honestly can't see either of them with anyone else.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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raj | 2017.12.15 - 07:21AM | 4: Occlumency the First | Signed |
Lovely story! |
loreen77 | 2017.12.05 - 06:11PM | 4: Occlumency the First | Signed |
I read this chapter last night in bed and it was such a perfect chapter to read at bedtime. Well done!! |
Sampdoria | 2017.12.05 - 07:11AM | 4: Occlumency the First | Signed |
Thank you so much for another great update. |
Jong_Kahn | 2017.12.02 - 01:19AM | 3: The Ballroom Incident | Signed |
Tears came to my eyes when he made her necklace into a portkey to his office. What a gift--especially for what it represents. A short but wonderfully written chapter. Thank you!
Author's Response: This is how I see his character - I might not always find the right words or feel at a loss about what to say, but his actions speak louder than words. That much, I believe is even Canon. :)
Thank you for your comment! |
Jong_Kahn | 2017.12.02 - 12:51AM | 2: The Soothing Qualities of Potions | Signed |
Poor Hermione! I know what it's like to fall asleep to the drone of a loved one's voice. It truly does represent safety, which is an emotional prerequisite for falling deeply asleep. As she's been an insomniac, she's particularly vulnerable, even forgetting about her strong feelings of attraction for Snape. Good psychological depiction--for both of them. Snape's frustrated, too! Here's the previously unassailable Miss Granger, whom he could count on to pay attention--not paying attention! I look forward to seeing how you'll have them both deal with this.
Author's Response: Have you ever felt this tingling inside your head, too? It happens rarely, and I can't even pinpoint what triggers it. Sometimes it's random acts of kindness, or someone speaking or moving in a manner you find incredibly soothing - in any case, the result feels really divine. Putting it mystically, I'd say it's like a brushing of souls. I really wish I knew what to do to actively recreate the feeling. *Sigh* |
loreen77 | 2017.11.28 - 11:19PM | 3: The Ballroom Incident | Signed |
I loved your info on PTSD and other abbreviation from Germany. Very cool to learn new things. |
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