Reviews for Getting the Best of the Gloomilows
|inthedesk||2018.02.10 - 05:03PM||7: Nightmares||Signed |
|I am so enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing.|
|inthedesk||2018.02.10 - 04:25PM||5: Detention||Signed |
|I'm enjoying this story immensely. Your plot is original and your dialog is spot on. Please keep it up!|
|loreen77||2018.02.08 - 10:52PM||8: Occlumency the Second||Signed |
|Now I extra excited and looking forward to the next chapter. |
|loreen77||2018.02.06 - 10:51PM||8: Occlumency the Second||Signed |
|Wow. Great thoughts on how she could have accomplished the Obliviation. I really enjoyed the idea of Lockhart being involved. So creative to work out those details. This story is s lot of fun to read and I find your style and writing very engaging and entertaining. |
Author's Response: Thank you, Loreen! For following and always leaving nice comments! The next chapter is for you!
|emcnary||2018.02.05 - 09:58AM||8: Occlumency the Second||Signed |
|I love your exploration of her skills with Obliviation--Lockhart was a brilliant addition! Very much looking forward to more, as this is very well-written. Hermione' s grief and guilt are palpable in this chapter. |
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be about Legilimency. I found all the mind gifts extremely interesting. Hopefully, you will, too! :)
|Snuffalus||2018.01.31 - 04:51AM||7: Nightmares||Signed |
|Wonderful story. Very believable and intriguing. Looking forward to the next bits! |
Author's Response: Thank you! I've already posted the next chapter. It will be up as soon as the admins have approved it.
|emcnary||2018.01.28 - 08:20AM||7: Nightmares||Signed |
|I love this story. Your characterizations are spot-on and your dialogue is wonderful. I can't wait for them to stop dancing around each other--I wonder, will Occlumency reveal anything interesting? I look forward to another update!|
Author's Response: Well, it kind of depends what you define as 'dancing around'. There won't be any physical transgression to their student-teacher relationship. But they will definitely cross quite a fews lines, have some heated moments and will know what they want even before they get physical. There will be a whole lot of intimacy - just not the sexual kind any time soon.
And yes, Occlumency will continue to play a huge role, and will definitely 'reveal something intereting'. (Think back to your wording once you get to chapter 16....)
Thanks a lot for your review!
|loreen77||2018.01.18 - 06:51AM||7: Nightmares||Signed |
| Sometimes itís the littlest thing that saves someone else. I found it fascinating that the one little item she did, and thought wasnít enough, was the key to saving him. Great chapter! |
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