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Reviews for Getting the Best of the Gloomilows

inthedesk2018.02.10 - 05:03PM7: NightmaresSigned
I am so enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing.

inthedesk2018.02.10 - 04:25PM5: DetentionSigned
I'm enjoying this story immensely. Your plot is original and your dialog is spot on. Please keep it up!

loreen772018.02.08 - 10:52PM8: Occlumency the SecondSigned
Now I extra excited and looking forward to the next chapter.

loreen772018.02.06 - 10:51PM8: Occlumency the SecondSigned
Wow. Great thoughts on how she could have accomplished the Obliviation. I really enjoyed the idea of Lockhart being involved. So creative to work out those details. This story is s lot of fun to read and I find your style and writing very engaging and entertaining.

Author's Response: Thank you, Loreen! For following and always leaving nice comments! The next chapter is for you!

emcnary2018.02.05 - 09:58AM8: Occlumency the SecondSigned
I love your exploration of her skills with Obliviation--Lockhart was a brilliant addition! Very much looking forward to more, as this is very well-written. Hermione' s grief and guilt are palpable in this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be about Legilimency. I found all the mind gifts extremely interesting. Hopefully, you will, too! :)

Snuffalus2018.01.31 - 04:51AM7: NightmaresSigned
Wonderful story. Very believable and intriguing. Looking forward to the next bits!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've already posted the next chapter. It will be up as soon as the admins have approved it.

emcnary2018.01.28 - 08:20AM7: NightmaresSigned
I love this story. Your characterizations are spot-on and your dialogue is wonderful. I can't wait for them to stop dancing around each other--I wonder, will Occlumency reveal anything interesting? I look forward to another update!

Author's Response: Well, it kind of depends what you define as 'dancing around'. There won't be any physical transgression to their student-teacher relationship. But they will definitely cross quite a fews lines, have some heated moments and will know what they want even before they get physical. There will be a whole lot of intimacy - just not the sexual kind any time soon. And yes, Occlumency will continue to play a huge role, and will definitely 'reveal something intereting'. (Think back to your wording once you get to chapter 16....) Thanks a lot for your review!

loreen772018.01.18 - 06:51AM7: NightmaresSigned
Sometimes itís the littlest thing that saves someone else. I found it fascinating that the one little item she did, and thought wasnít enough, was the key to saving him. Great chapter!

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