Reviews for Unforced Error
| ceridwyn78 | 2017.12.02 - 02:46PM | 16: Chapter 16 | Signed |
| So exciting, I can't wait for more! |
| loreen77 | 2017.12.02 - 12:44AM | 15: Chapter 15 | Signed |
| Delicious interactions. The image of him weaving tre fabric along her leg was very sensual. |
| bulochka | 2017.12.01 - 07:29AM | 15: Chapter 15 | Signed |
| Hi, thanks again for your wonderful story. Cant wait for them to finally escape...and hope they ll do it rather smoothly...have mercy on poor readers! |
| loreen77 | 2017.11.30 - 10:14PM | 14: Chapter 14 | Signed |
| Oh thank goodness he is back and alive. I imagine the dark lord has to be pretty impatient and Nalfoy is going to make this second move very soon. |
| octavia32 | 2017.11.30 - 12:22AM | 15: Chapter 15 | Signed |
| Excellent job-- this is great read! Very well thought out plot (nice and exciting!) and their interaction is awesome. I'm really enjoying the mix of romance, heightened responses that are psychological as well as physical and the witty repartee as they dance around each other trying to figure a way out of their situation...really looking forward to where this goes! |
| mt_nestor | 2017.11.29 - 06:11PM | 15: Chapter 15 | Signed |
I usually don’t read WIPs but I am seriously addicted to your story. More! More! 👏🏻
Author's Response: If it helps, this work is finished in rough draft. I'm posting as chapters are edited, and it will 100% for sure definitely be finished!
Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. |
| Jillianna | 2017.11.29 - 06:10PM | 15: Chapter 15 | Signed |
| I really like this madly-in-love, passionate, jealous Sev.
I am glad he isn't another boring bodice-ripper-snape :D |
| raj | 2017.11.28 - 07:12AM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Whew! I mean, of course he can't die, right? Not like that, at least... Right? (I know - read and find out) But I was actually worried at the end of the last chapter; your story keeps pulling me in 'til I can't think straight! :) |
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