Reviews for Unforced Error
| mellbell | 2019.03.27 - 11:16AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| I'm sorry but "Thanksgiving at the Weasley's" why would Hermione be meditating on a falsehood? Thanksgiving is a North American holiday, specifically Canada and the USA. But sure our British heroine would be thinking about celebrating it with her British friend's family. It is a good story so far but errors like that pull a reader out of the story and make me seriously doubt I want to continue. |
| LovesRickman | 2018.10.01 - 03:56AM | 23: Epilogue | Signed |
| Absolutely awesome!!!!
Missy aka LovesRickman |
| joannie | 2018.09.26 - 11:30PM | 23: Epilogue | Signed |
| Your story made up for the horrible ending of Book 7, which I put down and didn't finish reading for nearly a year. I did not like the ending at all - it seemed senseless to me. Thank you for the beautifully crafted, thoroughly suspenseful and thought out plot. It has been an amazing ride - I'm just sorry it had to end. joannie |
| joannie | 2018.09.26 - 10:39PM | 20: Chapter 20 | Signed |
| Well, that was a shattering chapter. |
| joannie | 2018.09.26 - 10:02PM | 19: Chapter 19 | Signed |
| Absolutely bloody brilliant! |
| joannie | 2018.09.26 - 09:43PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
| That was intense! |
| joannie | 2018.09.26 - 09:34PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
| I had to stop mid-read and say, "Marvelous idea with the thread charm." I am enjoying your story immensely. Once has to search for really good stories. I am so glad I found yours. |
| joannie | 2018.09.25 - 12:52PM | 11: Chapter 11 | Signed |
| Beautiful. Moving. Hopeful. |
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