Reviews for Unforced Error
skygle | 2018.01.17 - 12:40PM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
Can't wait for any updates! |
emcnary | 2018.01.14 - 11:52AM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
Yay!!!! I'll have you know that I stayed up far later than necessary reading this last night an have been hiding in the laundry room today, half folding laundry, half reading! Loved it and can't wait for the epilogue! |
emcnary | 2018.01.14 - 10:06AM | 20: Chapter 20 | Signed |
Oh my gosh, the feels!!!! I am both looking forward to finishing this, but terrified--if she was under the charm and doesn't actually love him, I will be so sad! The scenesl in the manor and their escape were great! Very action-packed, I felt as if i was there. Well done. |
emcnary | 2018.01.14 - 12:33AM | 14: Chapter 14 | Signed |
Oh my gosh, I am binge-reading this so quickly I haven't even stopped to review! So original, so sensual, so emotional. Your characterization of both are amazing, as is the dialogue. I can't wait to read more, and will hold my breath and fervently wish that the charm is not affecting Hermione and severus will not be broken hearted in the end! |
Sampdoria | 2018.01.12 - 07:38AM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
What a amazingly brilliant update, I loved it:-)) Make the epilogue long and detailed:-)) |
jaemistoryteller | 2018.01.10 - 02:27AM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
That is a lovely way for things to end between them, and I bet the boys are in for a surprise, because its one thing for her to say it, its another for them to show it. Lovely tale. |
jaemistoryteller | 2018.01.10 - 01:11AM | 21: Chapter 21 | Signed |
Yay for being able to rejoin the boys and everything working out better than expected. That's curious, I wonder where he went, hopefully not doing something stupid. |
loreen77 | 2018.01.09 - 11:38PM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
A most satisfying reunion. Great chapter. I am sad this is almost over. |
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