Reviews for Unforced Error
Jong_Kahn | 2017.11.18 - 07:08PM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
Woo-hoo! Getting good! (Fans herself a little with her hand...) |
Pixie Dust | 2017.11.18 - 10:36AM | 11: Chapter 11 | Signed |
"For tonight it was enough "
<3 <3 <3 this chapter was breath taking |
bulochka | 2017.11.15 - 11:04PM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
This is the most fascinating and passionate story I ve read lately. They are so real, sň almost visible and beautiful. Please keep them like this till the end!
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loreen77 | 2017.11.14 - 02:57AM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
Love this chapter!! |
loreen77 | 2017.11.14 - 02:51AM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
I wonder if the cut glass moved if they get emotionally more intimate or just if physically. |
Sampdoria | 2017.11.13 - 05:06AM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
Loved the updates, I am getting truly hooked on your story and is very much looking forward for the next update. |
loves23rules | 2017.11.12 - 02:26AM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
This story is becoming better and better. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. |
loreen77 | 2017.11.07 - 06:45AM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
Fascinating idea about the “hand” affecting the spell. Will we learn more about this in later chapters?? I am intrigued and a little confused about how it occurs. Also curious about the children’s game / rhyme you mentioned. |
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