Reviews for A Kiss for the Netherfairies
|DarkenCoul||2018.06.13 - 03:04PM||3: A Matter of Life and Death||Signed |
|Yes, the link worked! Hurray! I will definitely read them all there as well but I think I will wait to leave my reviews on the later chapters until they've been posted here, so I can re-read them again to see any changes you've made. :-) Thank you! You, my dear, are a fantastic writer with incredible insight and an intuitive grasp of the depth of the characters. Don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise!|
Author's Response: Looking for changes won't work once I'm through... I updated most of the chapters on Fanfiction.net, too, so that the stories are the same. :)
Thank you very much for boosting my confidence so much! It's especially hard for me to judge my own writing skills, given that I'm not writing in my native language. I guess I dare to get more creative in German... in English, I have no idea if using certain images or expressions would still be understood or sound okay. I puzzled my dear beta a few times when doing so in English. :) But I love the language and love learning more and more by writing and reading stories. I'm really happy that English native speakers appreciate them and enjoy reading them!
Thank you again! You rock!
|DarkenCoul||2018.06.13 - 02:24PM||3: A Matter of Life and Death||Signed |
|I am absolutely interested in reading the Christmas conversation, so definitely send me the link! Also, I've already finished all the chapters so far posted here of the sequel [blush], I couldn't stop til I devoured them all. I am now going back through and reading them again and leaving my thoughts on each chapter while I attempt to patiently wait til more are posted. :-)|
Author's Response: Okay, here's the link to the Harry Potter / Severus Snape story. I've not yet posted the last chapter, as people seemed not really taken with this. I have it basically ready and it WILL be added - I was just busy with quite a few other things lately, so I didn't really get around to posting it. My beta has to go through it before as well.. I'll see that I get it finished within the next couple of weeks.
You will find the Gloomilows finished on Fanfiction.Net, too. I'm translating the story into German, and while doing this, I always end up changing and adding to the original English version. So if you stay here on Ashwinder, you will always get the latest and (hopefully) best edition. But if you're going to go through the story again anyway, you can go ahead and finish it on the other site, too. :) Patience is not MY forte :D
Does the link work?
|DarkenCoul||2018.06.13 - 02:06PM||3: A Matter of Life and Death||Signed |
|Suffice it to say, you expressed exactly my own frustrations with the story JK wrote. It all seemed so full of holes and ways to easily go wrong that as a bucket it certainly would never hold water. I was always surprised at how many people didn't seem to question it and it always frustrated me. The whole 'plan' really didn't make sense and truly was absurd. So thank you for righting that injustice, even if only in fiction. |
Author's Response: Oh, if you're into these logic hole things (I definitely am - I hate then in stories!) I might have another Harry Potter story that might b of interest for you. Once you start on the sequel, you will be missing two weeks of Christmas holidays. These chapters were originally not intended to be part of the story, but I wrote most of it in the meanwhile. And it so happens that Severus and Harry have a heart-to-heart in it: about everything that happend in the night his parents died, about the prophesy and why Snape gave it to Voldemort in the first place, why Voldemort didn't react right away, about WHY on earth Voldi spent 11 years in a forest in Albania and and and..
Basically, I'm trying to close every hole that JFK left us in her books, I hope I did so successfully. If you're interested and dont't want to wait: I published this 'story' (not yet finished) on Fanfiction Net. Sorry to say it didn't get many reviews - most people don't seem to be into these things so much.
It's absolutely not a romantic story, just a very long talk between Sev and Harry about past events. Let me know if you're interested and I'll give you the link. :)
|VelvetChocolate||2017.10.03 - 04:45AM||3: A Matter of Life and Death||Signed |
|That last line is such a torturous tease! I really like this story! I am reading it as it comes out and will definitely be doing a complete reread when it is completed.|
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like it! I have good news for you... I'm just about to finish the sequel, which, with 23 chapters, will be far longer than 'Kiss for the Netherfairies'. I'm planning weekly updates for both stories. Thanks for your review!
|loreen77||2017.10.01 - 10:17PM||3: A Matter of Life and Death||Signed |
|Loved that last line. I eagerly await your next chapter. |
Author's Response: I'll have it ready by next week-end. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
|Pixie Dust||2017.10.01 - 05:03PM||3: A Matter of Life and Death||Signed |
|I'm addicted to this story!|
Author's Response: Hearing from my readers means very much to me! I'm addicted to your kind words as well. Thank you!