Reviews for Time Immemorial
|Tigerlily304||2018.05.13 - 12:13PM||1: Chapter One||Signed |
|Love the story so far, I've always liked the time travel genre and I love the fact that James and Sirius are seen as bullies not just lovable pranksters ( their no Weasley twins) and that smart, beautiful and adored by everyone Lily Evans is not a saint.|
Author's Response: Thanks! I know it isnít a popular view, but Iím a Severus partisan of the first order.
|littlesnapeplushies||2017.09.14 - 05:50PM||1: Chapter One||Signed |
|Oh this looks very promising! I love reading time-turner stories, so I'm excited to find out how this one will go. Also looking forward to some interaction between Hermione and Severus :) I like how you portrayed Riddle and the story behind the Dark Mark. The part where dumbledore asks the castle to grant her sanctuary is very original and a great idea. This Defense teacher... I wonder if one can trust him? This has been a treat to read so far, and I'm looking forward to future installments :) Keep up the good work! And thank you for sharing this :)|
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Re: the orginality of the Sanctuary, I must credit Badgerangel's "Smoke" with the idea of the Sanctuary. I did contact that author about using the idea (once I remembered where I read it), although we did it differently. (And they were okay with it.) Here's the link for that story if you are interested, it is one of my favorite WIPs. http://archiveofourown.org/works/5070385/chapters/11659717
|loreen77||2017.09.06 - 07:29AM||1: Chapter One||Signed |
|You moved me to tears in the first chapter. Well done. Her frustration and despair were so raw and all consuming. I feel really bad for her. |
Author's Response: Thank you! The story will have its light moments too, I promise!
|nene72||2017.08.26 - 03:30AM||1: Chapter One||Signed |
|Can't wait for the next installement!|
|Jong_Kahn||2017.08.20 - 02:21AM||1: Chapter One||Signed |
|A fine start, Fawkesy Lady! |