Reviews for After Happily Ever After
|loreen77||2017.09.02 - 10:27PM||7: Chapter Six||Signed |
| I have a certain song from the band police running through my head. Don't stand, don't stand, don't stand so close to me. It just seems to fit this chapter so well. This is going to be a tough year for both of them, but interesting. I really look forward to your next chapter. |
Author's Response: Excellent! I love that you tied this with Don't Stand So Close. hahaha! It's perfect. <3 Sorry it took so long, it's actually really hard to upload to Ashwinder bc I have to convert everything into HTML format and it's quite time consuming. I have this written through Chapter 37, I'll post as often as I can. :o)
|loreen77||2017.09.02 - 10:06PM||6: Chapter Five||Signed |
| So happy Ashwinder is back up and running. I was rereading the last couple chapters to get back in the flow of the story. And I figured out my previous confusion, on my phone there's a way to put the chapter into an easier to read format. But for some reason it cut out The last two paragraphs of this chapter. Makes a lot more sense when you read the entire chapter. LOL. Great chapter, I look forward to reading the next one.|
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Loree77 - I just wanted to take a moment to let you know that I will not be continuing to post here. I understand that this site has a high quality of fan fiction with minimal to no errors, and while I appreciate this very much, it's near impossible to get things posted.
I am not a professional writer. I have a Beta, but she is also not a professional writer. The admins here will give you only so many corrections every time you submit the story. It takes them 2-3 days to return your email. Then you must correct and resubmit. If you miss things, they decline to post it yet again and you start the process over.
I just don't have time for this. I'm a mom of four, work 12-hour days, 5-days per week, run two cub scout dens, am taking online classes working on my bachelors degree. This is supposed to be a fun, creative outlet for me, and this site just takes the fun out of it.
Therefore - if you wish to continue this story, I ask you take a look over at AFF, FFN, or AO3. I have it listed under this name on all those sites.
Thanks for your following. ~Lissa
|loreen77||2017.05.17 - 06:56AM||6: Chapter Five||Signed |
|This has the feel of a dream, not reality. Is it a dream?|
Author's Response: You are correct. It's a dream as evident when Hermione wakes in the last paragraph. :o)
|loreen77||2017.05.16 - 11:45PM||5: Chapter Four||Signed |
|Muggle born kidnappings. That is awful. Are any of the missing canon characters? |
Author's Response: As of now, no missing canon characters. It's hard to breech the walls of Hogwarts.
|loreen77||2017.05.14 - 10:33PM||4: Chapter Three||Signed |
| I love the Introduction of your original character. I really like her so far, and I liked the meet and greet between her and the regular g of your original character. I really like her so far, and I liked the meet and greet between her and the regular gang. |
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I adore Lizzie. She modeled after my sister - sharp, sassy, firecracker with a big heart and the inability to tell a lie. I'm so touched that the communities I'm posting on love her so much. I've had numerous people tell me: "I love your OC, and that's hard to do. I don't usually like OC's!" I'm floored with the positive response to her. Hopefully more today. I'm waiting for the next two chapters to be approved.
|loreen77||2017.05.14 - 10:24PM||3: Chapter Two||Signed |
|Two insecure people who jump to conclusions about what the other is thinking..... sometimes I just wanna reach in a story and smack the characters upside the head. Lol. Great chapter. |
Author's Response: Daft, I know. Gotta increase the sexual tension a little bit, though...hehehe
|loreen77||2017.05.14 - 07:06PM||2: Chapter One||Signed |
Author's Response: :oD Yay! Glad you like!
|loreen77||2017.05.14 - 06:53PM||1: Prologue||Signed |
|Welcome to the ashwinder community. I am so glad you decided to share your story with us. Wow, first chapter really grabs your attention. Very intense!|
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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