Reviews for After Happily Ever After
|loreen77||2017.05.17 - 06:56AM||6: Chapter Five||Signed |
|This has the feel of a dream, not reality. Is it a dream?|
Author's Response: You are correct. It's a dream as evident when Hermione wakes in the last paragraph. :o)
|loreen77||2017.05.16 - 11:45PM||5: Chapter Four||Signed |
|Muggle born kidnappings. That is awful. Are any of the missing canon characters? |
Author's Response: As of now, no missing canon characters. It's hard to breech the walls of Hogwarts.
|loreen77||2017.05.14 - 10:33PM||4: Chapter Three||Signed |
| I love the Introduction of your original character. I really like her so far, and I liked the meet and greet between her and the regular g of your original character. I really like her so far, and I liked the meet and greet between her and the regular gang. |
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I adore Lizzie. She modeled after my sister - sharp, sassy, firecracker with a big heart and the inability to tell a lie. I'm so touched that the communities I'm posting on love her so much. I've had numerous people tell me: "I love your OC, and that's hard to do. I don't usually like OC's!" I'm floored with the positive response to her. Hopefully more today. I'm waiting for the next two chapters to be approved.
|loreen77||2017.05.14 - 10:24PM||3: Chapter Two||Signed |
|Two insecure people who jump to conclusions about what the other is thinking..... sometimes I just wanna reach in a story and smack the characters upside the head. Lol. Great chapter. |
Author's Response: Daft, I know. Gotta increase the sexual tension a little bit, though...hehehe
|loreen77||2017.05.14 - 07:06PM||2: Chapter One||Signed |
Author's Response: :oD Yay! Glad you like!
|loreen77||2017.05.14 - 06:53PM||1: Prologue||Signed |
|Welcome to the ashwinder community. I am so glad you decided to share your story with us. Wow, first chapter really grabs your attention. Very intense!|
Author's Response: Thank you!!
|Desert_Sea||2017.05.14 - 07:55AM||1: Prologue||Signed |
|Great to see you've brought your lovely story here xx|
Author's Response: DS: You're the sweetest. I have to say I'm adoring this site. The admins are wonderful editors and are helping me immensely. Thanks for taking a moment to comment! <3