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Reviews for Doing it for the Order

loreen772017.02.14 - 11:20PM18: Gag OrderSigned
His emotion and vulnerability is endearing.

Author's Response: He is quite a soft Snape, this one :)

Erika Rexen2017.02.11 - 11:17AM17: Handing Out OrdersSigned
Being new to this site, thus far it's terrific. Your story is fantastic, and offers a wonderfully realistic approach to your premise. Once begun, I was unable to stop reading... all night. Sadly, I will admit to being ridiculously impatient to see how things move on, but also concerned for her safety regarding the DE's.

Author's Response: I'm glad it has you hooked. There are 33 chapters total in this one, hopefully there will be another up soon. Thanks for reviewing. P.S. You're right to be concerned about the DEs ;)

emcnary2017.02.08 - 11:17PM17: Handing Out OrdersSigned
Nice!!!!! Interesting how he obviously wants her there, but is still keeping her at arm's length. I'm wondering if Lucius is going to make another appearance soon...he makes such a good villain:)

Author's Response: Yes, I like Lucie as a villain too. I don't think he can stay away for too long. ;)

loreen772017.02.08 - 10:58PM17: Handing Out OrdersSigned
Just sitting here imagining Rickmans voice says Rea-d.......*sighs*......... well done. That was very hot.

Author's Response: Yes. He's just a bit too delicious. ;)

prettychocolate2017.02.08 - 10:39PM17: Handing Out OrdersSigned
Damn. No words.

Author's Response: ;) <3

artemizija2017.02.07 - 04:38PM17: Handing Out OrdersSigned
Great job so far. Really enjoying how you lead their internal dialogues. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying this story. Next chapter should be up soon. :)

SeveroSnape2017.02.04 - 05:00AM16: Law and OrderSigned
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hopefully up soon :)

loreen772017.02.02 - 10:22PM16: Law and OrderSigned
Wonderful dialogue. It feels so authentic and at times perfectly awkward. To me that is a sign of well written dialogue when you feel the awkwardness of a situation and it is palpable though the words. Great job.

Author's Response: I'm pleased that the dialogue is working as there are more characters playing significant roles in this one than in my previous ones and I wanted to be able to convey them in a reasonably authentic way. Cheers :)

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