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Reviews for Doing it for the Order

loreen772016.12.04 - 02:40PM2: A Tall OrderSigned
Their encounter in the potion's storeroom was brilliantly written. 15 minutes. Lol.

Author's Response: Yes. I just thought the count down was so Hermione :)

loreen772016.12.04 - 08:21AM1: Doing it for the OrderSigned
Oh dear. Bad Riddle making such a decree on his followers. Very curious to see how you can get around the different muggle each time rule.... seemed odd that you can get around that rule but can't find a way to get around the no pristitute rule.

Author's Response: Good questions. Hopefully they will be answered in the coming chapters. Let me know if they're not. :)

raj2016.12.02 - 09:38AM3: Taking OrdersSigned
Hermione's sarcastic mental voice is scathingly funny and I love it. And I like the choice to show this scene from Snape's POV.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pleased that this chapter worked. :)

splinteredflame2016.12.02 - 08:48AM1: Doing it for the OrderSigned
"In reality, she barely He was exceedingly private and conversed in a manner that vacillated between derision and sarcasm, making it impossible to foster any sort of connection, no matter how superficial." You are so damn good. Don't you dare stop writing this ship, EVER.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It means a lot that people enjoy my writing. I hope I have a few more left in me yet :) <3<3

Jong_Kahn2016.12.01 - 11:56PM3: Taking OrdersSigned
Whoa--you're dealing with real, heavy-duty feelings here. I can't blame Hermione for feeling as she does (even Severus himself understands it), but how uncomfortable for everyone, including the readers. I hope you're as good psychologically at changing her outlook as you are depicting this negative part. It's going to be tough emotional going with this story, if you're really going to be true to her feelings. Let's see how you handle it. Good chapter, albeit rather painful.

Author's Response: Thanks J_K - Yes, I wanted to push this one in a new direction that more accurately reflected the reality of their virtually absent prior relationship and the likely response of a bright, opinionated, fiery 17 y.o. virgin. I hope I can do justice to both of their emotions throughout. DSx

raj2016.12.01 - 03:28PM2: A Tall OrderSigned
Intriguing start - I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you. More on the way :)

Breath2016.12.01 - 10:00AM3: Taking OrdersSigned
How will Hermione take it? Her point of view will be interesting. Your descriptions of the charakters are always highly imaginativ and not too voluminous. Just the right amount of what I love. We all know that she is going to love it finally. Never the less, I'm burning for next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you xx I like to keep the pace up if I can. This one is going to be a bit of a roller coaster. Hope you enjoy it :)

Ljpjcg2016.11.29 - 11:36PM1: Doing it for the OrderSigned
Review for Debaucery: I didn't want to type a review for that story because there are 69 reviews. Even thought more is better, 69 is a good number. So I want to say that story is crazy and enjoyable despite how much I hate it when Snape gets his jiggy on with non-Hermione characters. And I am glad it was a smutty HEA. Review for this story: love the premise and can't wait to see how HG changes her mind and gets down & dirty with ol' Snapey!

Author's Response: This was so funny - I loved that you preserved the '69 reviews' - hilarious. Great that you also loved it despite Snape's man-slut behaviour. I would never deliver anything other than an HEA. The current fic is probably just as fraught but in a different direction. I hope you enjoy it x

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