Reviews for Doing it for the Order
Pixie Dust | 2016.12.31 - 02:55AM | 11: Not What She Ordered | Signed |
I am stalking this story for an update!
Author's Response: Hopefully next one coming soon :) |
vickety | 2016.12.29 - 12:36PM | 11: Not What She Ordered | Signed |
It is funny to me that she assumes he did not manage to pick up a woman, so she does not even ask. Perhaps this issue will not come up for another month. I wish this chapter had a couple more paragraphs. How did he behave after? He should've at least thanked her for checking on him.
Author's Response: I guess it was implied at the beginning when she caught him drunk and he admitted that the enchantment hadn't been fulfilled. I agree - their communication is poor, which is really a feature of why things have progressed with difficulty throughout. I hope any questions might be answered in future chapters. I have another 8 ready to post. Cheers DS |
loreen77 | 2016.12.28 - 08:46AM | 11: Not What She Ordered | Signed |
I really like that she went to check on him. And I am glad they were able to find mutual satisfaction in the shower. Well written.
Author's Response: Yes, I think she may still be in obligation mode but at least she cares. |
loreen77 | 2016.12.28 - 08:36AM | 11: Not What She Ordered | Signed |
Red badge of courage......
Author's Response: Awesome. Will need to add that ;) |
bralon | 2016.12.27 - 10:12PM | 1: Doing it for the Order | Signed |
You keep amazing me with your original plots and awesome writing! I already know your lemons are *cough* HOT, so I'm really looking forward to reading them in this fic! Chapter 2 here I come!
Author's Response: Hey Bralon, this one is a bit of a roller-coaster and there are quite a few lemons - no surprises there I guess ;). I hope you enjoy it! :) |
loreen77 | 2016.12.26 - 10:33PM | 10: Not What He Ordered | Signed |
Wow things just get rougher and rougher for Sev. Now time to get over the issue and realize sex is the best cure for cramps. Just do it in the tub or shower and no problem.
Author's Response: LOL. I totally love all of the advice he has been given. I think it's helping :) |
loreen77 | 2016.12.26 - 10:22PM | 9: Return to Order | Signed |
Way to go miss Granger. Very brace of her. And your line about the lollipop made me laugh aloud. Well done.
Author's Response: Gryffindor through and through . . . and she likes lollipops which turned out to be a good thing ;) |
loreen77 | 2016.12.26 - 10:09PM | 8: Out of Order | Signed |
Ouch, poor Sev. I hope Hermione is a little more understanding of his requirements in the future. Another great chapter!
Author's Response: She's on a steep learning curve! |
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