Reviews for Doing it for the Order
|bubbles28||2017.12.22 - 03:32AM||11: Not What She Ordered||Signed |
|It's interesting that Hermione being infertile at this point in her cycle didn't register with the curse.|
|Roma ||2017.12.17 - 06:06PM||1: Doing it for the Order||Signed |
|Loved their relationship progression. I rushed home from work a couple times to finish reading the story! Great job!|
|Pixie Dust||2017.10.21 - 02:27PM||33: Epilogue||Signed |
|I just re-read this because it's awesome. My favorite chapter is what I nicknamed "the nose chapter ".
I can't wait to read more of your work.|
|Lunalove22||2017.09.07 - 03:40PM||33: Epilogue||Signed |
|Thank you, I loved the story. x|
Author's Response: Thank you so much x
|Derelict Author||2017.08.27 - 02:09PM||33: Epilogue||Signed |
|**WARNING: SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW**
This was a very interesting story for me. I thought I had seen it all in our fandom, but you managed to surprise me! Dumbledore's death here was a nest twist, and Parvati being into Hermione was novel -- and I love LGBTQ inclusion in the fandom.
There were parts where the characters definitely veered into OOC -- Hermione at spin the bottle and sporadically throughout, Severus seemed to "sob" more than seems canon, and the nickname "Vati" made me groan. The epilogue especially seemed hamhanded in truing to give a glimpse of the future, though you DO have a gift for comedic dialogue. Ron barely being noted was noticeable, as well.
But boy, do you write some gripping scenes when you're on. The scene with Hermione finally discovering the enchantment's origins was immensely gripping -- the pacing was fantastic, and Snape's reasoning was SO real. Fantastically in character, even. And your smut scenes really were hot, even when they at times seemed a little thesaurusy.
This is definitely a story I see myself rereading. The sex scenes are top notch, and your Snape is pretty darn good. I'm interested to see what else you may write!|
|kalechrus||2017.05.05 - 10:55PM||33: Epilogue||Signed |
|I loved your story! I didn't think there could be a more touching and powerful use of the "Always" phrase than what we knew from canon, but I absolutely prefer yours. Thanks so much for the story. I am going to check out everything you write. Oh, and please keep posting on this site. I think many Severus fans keep coming here, even though we don't always review. |
Author's Response: *Blushes* Thank you so much :)
I hope you find another of mine to enjoy. And I will keep posting if people are happy to keep reading xx
|kalechrus||2017.05.04 - 05:25PM||23: Secret Orders||Signed |
|I loved the "because ... fuck them" part. It's something I would say. Really enjoying this! |
Author's Response: Yes, me too ;) x
|Ghislaine||2017.05.03 - 09:17PM||33: Epilogue||Signed |
|If only Jo Rowling had been as inventive in portraying Dumbledore's death as you were in this story! I didn't see that coming, and I love to be surprised. The epilogue was both funny, with the Weasley twins, and extremely touching, with Severus and Hermione and their children. Brava!!!|
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed my version of events :) x
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