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Reviews for The Birth of Berenice

vlinder12017.01.06 - 03:14AM1: CupboardSigned
It has been too long. So long ago I saw you had updated your other story, but I had fallen a bit out of the Harry Potter fandom and your other story was a bit daunting. It is well written, but I was behind so much already, so I always thought to myself, 'tomorrow when I have proper time to read it properly'. But then I saw you had written another story. And in these free times, I thought, let's read that. And am I glad I did. The first chapter was lovely! I really liked the POV and the telling of the story. It kept me in the dark for some time about who was telling the story and to whom. Of course I thought I knew quite early on, but I learned to never that things for granted. It was nice the story was indeed told by Rose to Scorpius and Hugo. What a character Alexandra is!! Such rotteness inside her. Poor Snape for thinking he raped her and gotten her pregnant. Just terrible. And Hermione is great as well. I do have a soft spot for stories in which she is pregnant and there are troubles with the father of the child and Snape sweeps in (maybe more of a sadist than I like to think I am ;p) I am very curious to see how the next chapters will be. Will it continue after the birth or will it revert back in time. But that will have to wait for a small time, since I need to be somewhere in half an hour and I know I will be late if I read the next chapter. Poor me ;p

MlleGigi2016.10.09 - 07:11AM1: CupboardSigned
What on earth does Rose see in Scorpius? From the sound of it, he's every bit as odious as his father was -- arrogant, conceited, overindulged, and spiteful. If anything, it sounds as if he and Alexandra might have made a good couple!

Author's Response: LOL!! I've seen quite a number of these couples, where the spoilt heir falls for the smart underdog, and don't forget, like his father... he knows how to woo and court. Trust Herm's daughter's choice. She's not really nice to him either btw. Maybe that's their way of communicating? (and he's purty)

loreen772016.10.07 - 10:55PM1: CupboardSigned
Wonderful start. I love the unique pov.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've done quite a bit of work with POVs in this one. Hope you'll like them.

emmarick2016.09.27 - 08:15PM1: CupboardSigned
Extremely interesting premise and beginning. I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Will try to update once a week...

DawnEB2016.09.27 - 06:49AM1: CupboardSigned
This is a story wonderfully told by a grown woman in hindsight of her younger years, and how she saw what was going on around her even if she didn't necessarily understand it/want it to be - certainly more than the adults realised. It made for a very interesting point of view, as well as an intresting read. Well done, and thank you for sharing :)

Author's Response: Certainly, hindsight is always better. But as you'll see in next chapters, it's not always perfect, either... Thanks for R&R!

Eszther2016.09.26 - 06:26AM1: CupboardSigned
Thank you for a wonderful and thorougly in character story!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot :-)

VelvetChocolate2016.09.26 - 02:53AM1: CupboardSigned
Oh, wow... This is sooo good. I love the way you set it up as a conversation between Rose and Scorpius. Of course I have questions, which no doubt will be answered within later chapters. I hope soon. Its really good.

Author's Response: Well, some questions will be answered, and others asked... :-) Thanks. Rose and Scorpius... are they doers, or thinkers?




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