Reviews for Debaucery
Sarablade | 2016.09.30 - 01:06AM | 12: Sensualicious | Signed |
Should we fear what she'll do inside a sheep? Just please please don't kill either of them. Those are versions we could love for a longtime..
Author's Response: So much one could do inside a sheep don't you think ;) Now I'm not into killing . . . actually perhaps I should qualify that . . . not into killing characters I like. Thank you x |
Eucalyptus | 2016.09.29 - 05:12PM | 12: Sensualicious | Signed |
Oh my. Miss Gryffindor does indeed have a vulnerable underbelly underneath all that indignation, doesn't she? Very nicely crafted interaction between them. I especially enjoyed your characterization of Hermione, her compassionate nature trying desperately to convince herself that she's doing this to SAVE him. Haha at least she's honest enough to admit to herself that she's attracted to him. I can't help thinking Severus is past the point of pride when it comes to her desire to make him one of her 'causes'. He's in a bad place, clearly. Eager for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hermione is trying her best to cling on to her 'proper' ways. There's some pretty serious history that she needs to get over but he isn't old 'sexy pants' for nothing ;) He's definitely in a bad place but I think you're right, he's probably open to a lifeline :) |
turtlebug | 2016.09.29 - 12:32PM | 12: Sensualicious | Signed |
This continues to be amazing...so much so that I made myself late for work to read it!
Author's Response: Hahah! Hopefully it won't get you into trouble ;) Thank you <3 |
NNNN | 2016.09.29 - 01:05AM | 12: Sensualicious | Signed |
Marvellous! Well done! I am completely sucked in to your story and anxiously awaiting the upcoming chapter! :D
Very best fanfic I've read in quite a while
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really pleased that you are enjoying it. Next chapter shouldn't be far away <3 |
emmarick | 2016.09.27 - 09:30PM | 11: Lavishaggadelic | Signed |
You have created such an interesting struggle with Snape wherein he's difficult to like, but then impossible to hate. It makes Hermione's conundrum palpable. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: 'Difficult to like, but then impossible to hate' - that's definitely the balance I was going for - so glad it's been conveyed. More on the way :) |
Snuffalus | 2016.09.27 - 07:04AM | 11: Lavishaggadelic | Signed |
Wonderful story! Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Next chapter on its way :) |
Sarablade | 2016.09.26 - 03:42PM | 1: Debaucery | Signed |
Ah... Catching him under an icy waterfall... It's getting less dark and fluffier, but then you tell us he's planning on dying? Won't do.
Thanks for giving a good reason to come and check the site!
Author's Response: Yes, it's dark and fluffy - a bit like Severus :)
Thanks for coming back and checking! x |
Eucalyptus | 2016.09.26 - 02:35PM | 11: Lavishaggadelic | Signed |
I love Luna. And her suggestion for Hermione to HUG him is too perfect lol.
I'm really enjoying this story. Reading him in the books, watching him drift silently through scenes or deliver quietly cutting remarks ("Lupin...taking a little walk in the moonlight?") in the movies suggests so much roiling emotion and feeling under the surface. You have captured the potential and possible result of a lifetime of pain and disappointment. You are feeding my obsession hahaha. Keep at it. It's LOVELY.
Author's Response: I love your description of Severus' portrayal within the books and movies. I'm so glad that this version holds true. More than happy to keep feeding the obsession! Also, I was so taken with your earlier characterisation of Hermione, I've borrowed a few of your words for a future chapter - I hope you are okay with that. <3 |
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