Reviews for The Heir
Destine | 2016.09.13 - 03:59AM | 21: A Harmony Of Discord | Signed |
Wow. That last sentence. This will come back to haunt Snape.
Author's Response:
Mmmm... remember the diving boards from the Olympics with the green water? That's a good equivalent. Only the water is not safe in my story.
Please come back again and again too, and review, too! thanks. |
191987 | 2016.07.31 - 10:32AM | 21: A Harmony Of Discord | Signed |
Thanks for two new chapters! I'm curious about where to you'll take this story plotwise... So many different options... So much scheming, games-playing, deception. If I could make a wish, I'd opt for more Severus/Hermione/Em time, or rather "parentheses" ;) and less politics/economics in the next chapter - although I do know that these are necessary to bring the story forward. Please update again soon. Cheers.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The story is taking itself to a rollercoaster park. I was also impatient with the last chapters, but they're necessary if we want a real story and not a series of vignettes ( which are nice, too, but not the story).
I guess you'll like next chapter, then... or at least most of it - we'll see later. Thanks for R&R! |
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