Reviews for Thank you, Miss Granger
| Pixie Dust | 2017.01.16 - 07:01PM | 12: Back to Present/Reality | Signed |
| This is a great story. I loved the ending, but I would also love for it to continue! |
| marisamarinee | 2014.10.21 - 02:29AM | 3: How Severus became Snivellus | Signed |
| Huh |
| Book Lover | 2013.09.07 - 06:07PM | 12: Back to Present/Reality | Signed |
| Absolutely loved it! Now all it needs is a sequel over a relationship between them. :) xxx |
| pianita | 2012.08.10 - 09:54PM | 12: Back to Present/Reality | Signed |
| I loved it!!!! Hermione as the assertive female and the young Severus showing already sooo much potential. Please continue writting....More young Severus is you please? And the ending as so very tender, wonderful! |
| asprickman | 2012.07.16 - 07:53PM | 12: Back to Present/Reality | Signed |
| a really clever, interesting story and I love the characterisation, especially of young Severus. Satisfying to read something with depth, that makes you think, really worth reading. |
| adelgado | 2012.01.04 - 03:13PM | 12: Back to Present/Reality | Signed |
| interesting. I enjoyed it. thanks for writing |
| mgck | 2008.08.05 - 08:00PM | 6: Out of the Closet and Into Trouble | Signed |
| Ha. Teenaged boys. ...They're all the same -- Severus Snape or not. |
| curly | 2007.05.05 - 08:54PM | 8: Intercourse and consequences (Part. 1) | Signed |
| Where is the golf course, what with both of them "putting?" Please get another beta to go through this story. There are so many grammar and spelling errors. In one chapter you describe Sev's swallow cheeks. At least twice you use the same metaphor of being tensed like an arc. Please consider the usage of the semi-colon where appropriate. Some of Hermione's internal thoughts/dialogue makes me wonder if she has a mental disorder. What's with the disappearing / reappearing headache? She is reapeating herself over and over. This is a very different and intersting story. I am not sure if her going back is just a ploy so that we can be privy to her personal pschoanalysis. I plan to keep reading, but the abundance of errors and overyl self indulgent internal monologue is making it difficult. |
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